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JOSEPH MAY  /  DEALING IN TIME

TIME TO BUY


If I could, I surely would spend time to buy my time back.
I would bribe it away, gladly give time all time I’d saved. 
To hush time’s clock and hurts from all it stole from me,
I’d liquidate my time bonds and time earning stocks.

From the government to bread, false doctrine is fed
that time is for growing dimes to elsewhere bestow.
My soul longs for remote, a dwelling simple, a garden
ample, breathing without time strangling or mangling.

As time's slave, I must behave when it ends deep sleep
to summon me, ‘up, press and stress you working pawn.'
I sold time's possible joys when I enrolled in the goals
of a two-car-mortgage-anxiety-variety-cargo show.

Raised to believe responsibility was the surest path 
to fulfilment availability, I neglected my own math.
I didn't try a pencil but hopped traditional boxed squares
and one by one I landed on time squares aloof, never fair.

Time gave my baby’s first “I love you” away at daycare,
a vague recipient, like the vague I paid causing the incident.
Time given that I might prosper fostered so much lack that
if I could, I surely would spend time to buy my time back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 8:49 PM
Hey remind me if the few poems of yours I never saw. I am clicking endlessly on poems!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "TIME TO BUY." What a powerful write. Love your great last line. Have a blessed day with your win...............
May Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 7:16 AM
Congrats on your win CayCay, Nicely done
Jones Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 11:52 PM
Back to say well done and congratulations on your win dearest CayCay!
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 4:43 PM
Your take was so original and thoughtful. . congrats on making the winner list
Buhagiar Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 3:31 AM
Time does not belong to us really. My sister died long ago at 16. I am 85, full of desease but alive. My sister-in law is 98,and hoping to reach 100.
Hind Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 9:03 PM
This is felt in my core, your honesty. You are a brave soul to write such. Deeply beautiful, sad in places, but... thanks for sharing .
George Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 9:01 PM
What a wonderful take on time, dear Cay Cay. We all long to get back the time lost. But there's no way of restoring it back. "My soul longs for remote, a dwelling simple, a garden ample, breathing without time strangling or mangling." Love these lines. Also the ending line is wonderful----"if I could, I surely would spend time to buy my time back." All the Best!
Wolf Avatar
March 25, 2026 at 8:35 PM
Time gave away my baby's first 'I love you' away at day care... OMG. How telling... Wise owls say that the rich person is free to determine his/her future -- not to slave away forever to pay off mortgages. (I was lucky, it seems, though I didn't exactly 'cash in.')
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2026 at 1:01 PM
You started and ended it on that same fantastic theme; to spend time to buy time back. Very clever thinking. A lot of emotion sprinkled in here, such as disappointment with false doctrines and loss of precious moments like with having to work instead of be with your child. Well done, Caycay. By the way, I could spot rhymes here and there but maybe because I am on my phone, the lines are not ending in a way that lets me notice rhyming throughout. Is it consistent with rhyme in each stanza. Only saying this because of the contest requirement for rhyme
Crandall Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 9:23 PM
A clever and relatable poem. I like "spending your time to get your time back". I grinded through about 40 years of career, under the time gun, and I wake up every morning, appreciating my retirement.
Roper Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 7:34 PM
If they were good times, I would, of course, buy them all back. I would, in a heartbeat, buy it all to spend more time with my sons and their families. Well done, my friend.
Jones Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 5:39 PM
A thought provoking write! I was engaged and felt your disappointment in the daycare worker getting that much sought after phrase ‘I love you’ . You wrote a great contest contender! Best wishes!
Callus Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 4:37 PM
Time management is very complicated. When young I cared not how fast it went by, but now I realize that much of it got wasted, and keep trying to make up for it, which I assure you can be quite stressful :) But...I admit that I'm not wasting my time by reading this delightful poem of yours CayCay! Do let me know if eventually you find how to buy time back :) ~ Warm regards and goodnight (it's past my bedtime) // paul
Blown Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 3:59 PM
very philosophical......be careful about time .......some bits with a real momentum 'knot' be seen as no problemo.....very nice write len
Cunningham Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 12:28 PM
Something that we'd all like to do CayCay but sadly old father time marches on. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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