TIME TO BE LIKE BEES

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(A Freestyle Tanka Quintet)

Once feared allergy,

back in 1963,

gave wisdom to me:

Learned from the sting of a bee;

we need hiving unity:-

Researching bee stings,

revealed much about beings

and disunity:

We need hived togetherness;

reaping from the unity:-

Let’s get together,

sowing and reaping oneness

in all our labors:

Let’s be hived life’s weather;

surviving in shared meekness:-

In a life’s hiving,

let’s be about surviving;

stinging together:

Being for one another,

no matter what’s the weather:-

God’s our hive’s keeper,

his love, our living stapler;

faith, being our queen;

Our hived oneness always seen:

onederful onement, live streamed:-

TIME TO BE LIKE BEES (A Freestyle Tanka Quintet) Once feared allergy, back in 1963, gave wisdom to me: Learned from the sting of a bee; we need hiving unity:- Researching bee stings, revealed much about beings and disunity: We need hived togetherness; reaping from the unity:- Let’s get together, sowing and reaping oneness in all our labors: Let’s be hived life’s weather; surviving in shared meekness:- In a life’s hiving, let’s be about surviving; stinging together: Being for one another, no matter what’s the weather:- God’s our hive’s keeper, his love, our living stapler; faith, being our queen: Our hived oneness always seen; onederful onement, live streamed:-

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