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Time Through a Lovers Eyes

Looking out the window, I see a million stars. Some clustered together Transforming into shapes, while others are widely apart. We stand like a cluster. A thousand light years apart, Yet so close and united as one. Distance is just a number when the heart is in control. Days become years of agony, the minutes torture my soul. But with strength and will, any obstacle can be overcome; keeping in mind my long yearned goal. -Inactive Volcano

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Date: 8/14/2017 8:05:00 PM
Great expression and heart felt passion. It has quintain form and some rhyme also, very nice elaborate words.
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