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Time Out of Mind

T i m e O u t o f M i n d Time life’s pendular ever–present moment arcs across the frozen face of place. ©5/20/2017 submitted to – Pendulum of Time and Place – Poetry Contest

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/6/2017 8:08:00 AM

Very clever! Congrats.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/5/2017 2:32:00 PM

Well done, John, congratulations on your win :-)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/5/2017 9:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in my contest. Great stuff. The last stanza could also stand on its own and sums up the/your concept of the topic succinctly. Many wishes, Kai

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/22/2017 10:08:00 AM

This is so creative! Love the content, too.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/20/2017 3:42:00 PM

Wow! That is so clever and very well done both in formatting and composition:) Amitiés

Darren White

Date: 5/20/2017 1:20:00 PM

That's incredibly creative! I like it how you shaped your pendulum. As well as th poem itself. Good luck in the contest.