Time Out

Make no haste, your work is restless. Aeon give me pause-- no more ticking gears grinding ever towards the lonely end. Live the now. Even Death took a holiday, veering briefly from an eternity of reaping solitude. Take your time on earth and mingle-- overindulge in reverie. Rest assured, oblivion can wait.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/10/2010 9:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Hai Au Chu. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2010 12:39:00 PM

Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2010 7:48:00 AM

Hai Au Chu, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/19/2010 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Hai Au Chu. Love, Carol

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 10/18/2010 4:02:00 PM

wonderful poem, glad i stopped by the features today and found it hiding there. wonderful idea with brilliant lines and images, great work and congratulations on your feature. --Madison

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/17/2010 12:52:00 PM

Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all this happy Sunday with luv..

Royal Trevino

Date: 9/20/2010 11:21:00 AM

well time is all we have and time is all I spend lol, i like this one, I like that Aeon, interesting, =(^.^)=Royal

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2010 2:40:00 PM

HELLO~ HAI AU CHU ~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~He HE HE! Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read more poems, before my KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you guys. I posted a sad poem as well, hope you find time to read my latest poem*luv~SKAT

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/14/2010 8:51:00 AM

Great write, my friend! Reaklly enjoyed the read and your imagination!...Thank you also for your comments which I appreciate!...Have a nice week1...Gert

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 9/12/2010 5:12:00 PM

"oblivion can wait"..wicked line in a great poem!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/12/2010 1:05:00 AM

Extremely beautiful poem. I like the third one. Great write. And thank you for your comments on Patradoot. After finishing the remaining few more parts I am going to publish Patradoot in book form in English and Hindi both . Please wait till then. And thanks for your beautiful poem and your kind comments. Yes one thing Pl inform are you are based in US or else where? Love and best wishes........Ravindra.........Hai Au Chu