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Time Keeps Ticking Away

Time keeps ticking away Written By Dean Masciarelli September 6, 2010 (3:40pm) Time keeps ticking away and the days keep slipping by And you would rather stay inside of your bed all day far away from everybody then giving life another try Because you feel like it is much safer being that way But don’t let another day go by living your life so foolishly By sleeping every moment of it away Because the good Lord has bigger and better things in store for you you just have to be willing to try by not letting fear stand in your way

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Date: 9/6/2010 5:57:00 PM
Wise words to live by, Dean. This will inspire everyone weary of life...Thanks for sharing this...Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/6/2010 3:31:00 PM
So very true.. Enjoyed reading ..Take care~Deb
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Date: 9/6/2010 3:22:00 PM
Thanks so much for commenting on my poetry, I think this poem of yours really hits home for me, so often I just want to stay home in my cozy nest and feel safe, but I force myself to go out in the world, and I am always happy I did...you captured those feelings in your poem, perfectly,.. Love Constance
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