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Time In the Wind

Morning arose as any other Speech of the cardinal and his significant other Wet dew on the grass Shimmering mirrors of glass From his perch he sang as though he knew my name Crimson and bold And I am so old, as I am lame Though I walked this path for so many years This morning was different I bid him cheers I could feel the change The sun and how it was rearranged Yes summer has gone and moved away Retired to bring fall our way I gathered my basket and tucked in to stay I picked ripe red tomatoes and zucchini and herbs A little dried sunflower for the birds Those lovely green peppers and eggplant to Harvesting the goods of my labor The fresh tastes of summer, I savored their flavor A pluck of a pesky weed or two Before you knew it the morning flew In for lunch and a sit on my rock chair I drew the blinds And closed my mind And let life end in the breeze The next morning came ,she ceased

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/29/2008 6:24:00 AM
You have a knack for painting vivid scenes with words, sort of a verbal Norman Rockwell. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 8/27/2008 2:06:00 PM
this is a very beauitful and well wrote it was a joy reading it
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Date: 8/23/2008 10:48:00 AM
So much gentle beauty and serenity captured in this poem. Autumn sure is the season of fullfillment. Take care. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/20/2008 2:13:00 PM
A catchey title too..I love sometimes to just go outside my house and feel the wind blowing. Then I can hear the words of the song..the answer my friend is blowing in the wind...the answer is blowing in the wind. This is my time to talk with my Father and ask him to give me clarity...Love the write. Continue to share.
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Date: 8/19/2008 1:43:00 PM
Dear Laura, Your excellent poem paints a picture of peace, tranquility and serinity in death. Extremely smartly written poem rich in imagery and beauty of expression. Indebted to you for your lavish comments on my poem The Paper Boat. -Mohammad
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Date: 8/18/2008 4:46:00 PM
Laura, A lovely vision fillings one's heart with a sense of what it means to live and pass on in peace and love. I sure would love to leave this world, this way. Just beautiful hun! Truly enjoyed. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/18/2008 2:51:00 PM
What a beautiful poem with such lovely imagery. And such a peaceful passing. Wish we could all go that way. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/18/2008 1:09:00 PM
Laura - This well written poem was truly amazing - I enjoyed it very much - God Bless
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Date: 8/18/2008 12:54:00 PM
Love this poem. I have just come in from my garden...picking tomatoes and zuchinni...so I can relate. There is a touch of fall in the air, just as your poem indicates. My own grandmother, so many years ago, spent time in her garden, and one day, almost as you said, just sat in her rocker and slipped away. A beautiful, sad write. Blessings...Carrie
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