Time For a Wish

cold white moonlight drapes
diamonds all around me
dances with shadows
as curtains move with the wind
time to make that perfect wish
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November 21, 2012 at 8:02 PM
TaheraStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
Mannan Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 9:31 PM
Hey PD that was so touching. There is no thank you between friends. It is a great pleasure and honour for me to know you and read your wonderful work. God bless you always.
Ryerson Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 5:52 AM
Each line is a true gem, Tahera...last line sums it up to perfection...Congratulations! - Tim
Onclaud Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 2:42 AM
belated congrats, tahera... how this floats!..: huggs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 4:26 AM
Big congrats from Spain xx
Ramage Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 10:23 PM
beautiful tanka, well done. Lee
Poet Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 8:07 AM
Loved this on my first read Tahera!Congrats on your win in the contest.
May Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 5:12 AM
congrats on your win Tahera
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 12:27 AM
tahera. I really like this one. BIG congrats. The last line goes so well with the theme.
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 4:22 PM
Hey YOU ..you have GOT the tanka form HUZZAH and exquiste image! [now do another focusing on the wish ..more more ]Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 12:47 PM
A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
Ali Bhat Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 12:28 PM
this is amazing....congrats on ur win...:))
Horne Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 12:40 PM
love this tanka, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )
Horsman Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 2:47 PM
love this wonderful Tanka,
Poet Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 1:34 AM
Beautiful Tanka Tahera!Best wishes to you.
Pettit Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 10:49 PM
It was also time for a good tanka write. You have one here.
Onclaud Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 2:41 PM
a poetic feast celebrating beauty of wishes, tahera.. winning wishes and huggs!..:)
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 2:13 PM
I still have not posted my white poems. Maybe you will get to them before I post mine!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 11:47 PM
Tahera, this is really pretty. You know. You could add to this and make two more poems for the white contest. I did a poem about whiteness (not posted yet) and then did two related ones in tanka and haiku style!!
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