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Time For a Showdown

Time for a showdown with my ruptured soul, because I have come to the breaking point; no more- the sad past has taken a toll, I will end fear and express my viewpoint. Time for a showdown and confrontation, living in the dead past is not living; to stay this way will be my damnation, I accept life can be unforgiving. Time for a showdown and decisive fight, from this day I lock away my deep grief; I will look to the future with delight, go away sorrow that comes like a thief. Time for a showdown with my battered heart, new paths are unfolding so past- DEPART. ___________________________ March 6, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Time for a Showdown Copyright Protected, ID 18-1001-747-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Rhyme Battle X: Showdown sponsor, Juli-Michelle Ninth Place
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Gentry Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 11:31 PM
Congratulations on your win with this determined and touching rhyme.
Gauthier Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 11:30 PM
A most pleasant read, BW. Congrats on your fine win.
Roper Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 11:46 PM
Nicely done, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win! Dear friend
Michelle Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my Rhyme Battle contest. I loved this :) Love, Juli-Michelle
Inman Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Hi again BW, moving past the sorrow, it makes me happy for you. A beautifully strong and passionate write.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 6:05 AM
Sounds like your chasing away the ghosts! A smile and hug for you, sweet Constance!
La France Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Kim, thank you for visiting my poem and for the smile and hug
Cunningham Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 2:14 AM
This could easily be lyrics fir a song. Great verse B.W. Tom
La France Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Tom, thank you. I actually like writing lyrics.
Poteet Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 9:19 PM
I love the positive note t'wards the end of your sonnet here. I likened your first few verses to the pain and irritability of a herniated disk which my son is experiencing of late.
La France Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 9:22 PM
Reason, I am so sorry about your son's herniated disk but your comment was so funny !!! Thanks for visiting my poem ~
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