Time Flies Away

It's funny how time flies away.
"Like the blink of an eye"
my father did say. 

I know now what he meant.
My youth and beauty are all spent.
Where did that time go?

It is now I that is home alone.
From my nest my kids have flown.
I am my mother, my hands show.

As I type and am looking down,
at these puffy old hands I frown.
Could these hands be mine?

It's funny how time flies away.
I gave him my skinniest years I'd say.
That X husband of mine.

But flying time also brings wisdom.
We at last can escape from the prison
of youthful fears and wasted tears.

Roll on time but slow down please.
I have still so much to do and see.
From fear of the future release me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Promise Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 1:43 AM
Congrats on your third place. Not only can we feel the time passing as you describe it, but one can look down and see the face, hands and ask the same thing - where did the time go? God bless, RP.
Murray Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 4:38 AM
Thank you for such a lovely review of my poem Sunshine.
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 9:55 AM
So much wisdom in this poem, Jean, and unfortunately, the best of it comes with age. Nicely written, and congratulations on your podium win in this Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra
Murray Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Podium win. I love that! Thank you Sandra.
Kannan Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 2:13 AM
Nicely written...Loved it and congrats on your win in the contest....
Murray Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 2:19 AM
Thank you for taking the time to stop by Supraja.
Vaso Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 12:08 AM
What can I say, you have said it all so so well! :)
Murray Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 4:01 AM
That husband of mine will soon be almost famous, like me, by proxy Arthur.
Bauer Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 7:59 PM
i love the buddha quote at the beginning and all the examples you've included in the poem. wonderful ending, too! i can so relate to this one, jean...
Murray Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 4:57 AM
Although I realise my poems are all about Me...Me...Me, I like to think they strike a cord with others on life's journey. Like you Ilene.
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October 3, 2016 at 4:35 PM
I'm not sure who you are looking at in the mirror Jean, but your beauty has not left you. Besides, were I given a choice, I would choose wisdom over beauty every time. I really loved the poem!
Murray Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 4:42 PM
That's so sweet of you to say Daniel. If I am honest, I have never been so comfortable as with the body I have now. And, my mother had beautiful hands.
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