Notes About The Poem

taniwha (pronounced tah-nee-fah) in Maori folklore are sea creatures depicted as serpents or dragons with fiery eyes. On occasion I saw a few people swimming there that fit that description but no serpents.

*Skyhawks were RNZAF combat fighter jets.
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Time and Tide


In time shadows in an old windy shed
  are names of sojourners who've passed this way;
now my wandering boot does older tread
  where I passed on a long forgotten day.

I see their faces on wall and jetty
  drinking beer, watching the wind and tide turn,
where on horizon across a dark sea
  aerodrome Air Squadron lights brightly burn.

   Time and tide fade in this hidden cove
 where beneath the waves the taniwha rove.
 By the salt marshes of this cold gulf sea
        I carved my name for a posterity.

On its seawall and rocky jutting shore
  the white breasted gulls and shags flit the sky –
yes, there was a time but not anymore
  I gazed the stars over Whenuapai.

Crazed by lunar tide and hearts asunder
  fumbling some Anglo lass or native girl,
or some legless dumb fool fallen under
  feeding the fishes with a mighty hurl!

Into its riptides we dived bombed its depths
  on a leap of faith into the drop zone,
and from its pull clung to those ocean steps
  where over the Skyhawk war birds had flown.

   Time and tide fade in this hidden cove
where beneath the waves the taniwha rove.
By the salt marshes of this cold gulf sea
       I carved my name for a posterity.

Those dark undercurrents still rip below
  when its flood of memories ebb away,
and now all I am is a time shadow
  where I passed on a long forgotten day.


       Written: December 1991
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June 30, 2024 at 4:49 AM
Keith, Nice to remember those that have gone before and those we have associated with. You must have seen and experienced a lot if you were in the air.
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