Time and Again

Perfection is an illusive pastime,
an unending quest that hides delusion
in uncharted diversions on life's path;
Distractions litter obsession's by-pass,
obstacles spring up unannounced,by chance,
opportunity deflates in despair;
Again,again the siren's call beckons
innocent naivety to regard-
mediocrity nervously breaks down.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/17/2011 11:26:00 AM
Brian, Thank your for the honor of reading your worthy poetry. And Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/16/2011 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this stimulating write Brian.
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Date: 12/16/2011 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Retread" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/11/2010 7:12:00 AM
Outstandingly beautiful lines. Perfection is an unending quest that hides delusion. Brilliantly written lines from first to last. A great Poem I would like to read again and again. Thanks and many thanks for your precious comments on my poem from time to time. Best wishes and love Ravindra ....BS
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Date: 2/7/2010 4:17:00 AM
wow, this is brilliant. soup mail. : ))
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Date: 2/5/2010 6:27:00 PM
I am so glad I viewed your wonderful blank verse, Brian, as I was clueless on how to proceed, well still a little clueless but not as much.. lol
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:34:00 PM
enjoyed reading tday
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Date: 2/5/2010 2:25:00 PM
Enjoyed this one as it reflects the current blank verse style for the contest posted on Soup.. U have done this one to perfection and good luck if your entry.. mine is Creativity though I am doubtful I have achieved the proper meter required.. luv.. Linda-Marie.
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Date: 2/5/2010 11:25:00 AM
Perfection is a goal that is unattainable in this life but something to look forward to in the next. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. I have enjoyed writing some imagism from everyday happenstance from your challenge. Sara
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Date: 2/5/2010 11:07:00 AM
I thank you for comments and cheer up and look up Mar 10:27 And Jesus looking upon them saith, With men [it is] impossible, but not with God: for with God all things are possible. thanks again Brian
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Date: 2/5/2010 10:14:00 AM
Touche, Brian! Some of us waste so much time, emotion and opportunity to experience what it is "live" life, free of all the added anxiety of trying to be perfect. May be best to set boundaries, do our best with what we have, and don't go "building castles in the air" because they only get washed away sooner or later. Great job! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/5/2010 9:29:00 AM
Here's my form champion. 3rd from last line Agan/Again, again..spelling? perhaps breaksdown as the last word. Thank you Bri I THINK I'm beginning to hear the weak/STRESSED/ weak/STRESSED ..I think? Light & Love (line 6? 11 syllables?)
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:44:00 AM
Very descriptive of those of us who seek the impossible and drive ourselves mad. Well done!
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Date: 2/5/2010 12:35:00 AM
Excellent wording
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