Time, a River

time flows like river unaware until it's gone savour the moments November 10, 2020 For Sen-Ru (Rather than Hi-Ku) Poetry Contest Checked syllables (5-7-5) by howmanysyllables.com Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2020 4:08:00 PM

very nice. we really should savour them!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/11/2020 7:37:00 PM

Really nice. Through ages the idea runs. 'Somoy cholia jai , nodeer sroter praye... Love.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/11/2020 3:35:00 PM

Hello Mala, I agree. Good advice. Love Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/12/2020 11:34:00 AM

Hello Mala, you are welcome Mala. I hope all is well withyou. Enjoy your day my friend.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/11/2020 3:38:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene. So kind of you. Hugs, Mala

Silent One

Date: 11/11/2020 6:36:00 AM

Wise words... A profound senryu..

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/11/2020 3:36:00 PM

Thanks so much. Appreciate your thoughtful words.

Jcb Brul

Date: 11/10/2020 7:06:00 PM

So very true..So never miss a moment...seize the day...seize your joy! Lovely senryu dear Mala.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/10/2020 8:33:00 PM

Thanks so much, Dear Friend. Delighted to Learn a new Japanese poetry form.