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Time -Part 2-

Even then though—you ask how! How can she not return the hatred! But we humans cannot think so beyond To even dare comprehend the mystery sentiments she possesses Surrounding her are twelve unattainable senses That we only know from a single mind’s imagination Like space she is enigma And she will wander there without any question Her senses are twelve sojourners that never tire Watching with melodious eyes Some see darkness and some see light And none are ever affected by the garish dark Or even the furious bright Only Time can tell What the multiple futures hold But she is patient and silent Speaking for all of our burning minds Anger often burns our sides For we do not want her silent comfort Her hints seer us and overbear us Were it be truth we would see it as deceit Were it deceit we would at last find her a flaw We want everything now And for that we suffer And she is confused by our abhorrence But she is intelligent, brave and belligerent And she cuts no slack She will give none back But in forwardness she is abundantly generous Feeding us futures of hope Her thanksgiving is art to those at death’s door Those that make it in the uncertainty of night’s long abode Some think her cruel to have them live on But she had no choice in the matter She is merely a vigilante And in that vision—a humble giver Time sees the rulers of this world And smiles as she sees them go May you not think her cruel to smile To think that she thinks us inferior For it isn’t so! Time is on our side But we are ever against her Ever against her 8/5/13 (note: This was meant to be one full poem, but I could not fit it on one page. Thank you kindly for reading)

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Date: 9/8/2014 11:24:00 PM
I think Time wants to be loved...but as you say Laura, she is brave, intelligent, belligerent, and generous. Time, like a good woman, is a blessing. I will never look at Time the same way, she's become so beautiful through you...Justin. A FAV!
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Date: 10/31/2013 6:48:00 PM
Time...closeted and cloistered in the mind of men. What is it but a whisper of memories. I really liked how you described your perception of time. Well done. Allan
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Date: 8/31/2013 3:39:00 PM
Time can be an interesting thing and how so true time is subjugated to the hatred of man. Time gives us opportunities again and again and yet many are blind and oblivious to such opportunities. Lovely piece as always my dear friend. --Becca
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Date: 8/13/2013 7:19:00 PM
Alas I read it now. Time is on our side. The most precious gift we have is time. Don't let anyone waist it. The traveling hands of time never stop and she is benign. Beautiful and powerful. Thank you for sweeping me away. Kilmer
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Date: 8/6/2013 6:06:00 PM
Your welcome! You're making me think here. Time is on our side because she helps us make the most of our lives and not waste our being. Time also helps us leave when we must. You have a feel for the laws of nature that is very pleasant and agreeable. So, we don't have to rush time, but take in the beauty and relationships that are right here in front of us. I am feeling so honored to be able to read and respond to your work. Thanks for all of it!
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