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Time For a Vacation

TIME FOR A VACATION It is my wife’s lifelong dream, a fairytale place a magic land : The small village of Rye in Sussex , in southern England. This is the heart of England, its bosom - Filled with peaceful smells of blossom : Like a Dickens scene on christmas cards - Steep streets with cobblestones - no cars. Smoking chimneys, bow windows, roofs with thatches, Hanging baskets of alyssum and lobelia in batches - Her favorite colours white and dark blue: I wanted to make her dream come true. Tea and hot crumpets and warm butter oozing By the fire in the sitting room with grandad snoozing At four o’ clock by the chimes of the grandfather Clock which fascinates - it’s like theatre to her. Soft beds you sink into deeper and deeper; Little bedrooms with floral wallpaper She’s only seen in movies about Sherlock Holmes; And small windows recalling our childhood homes. We feel at ease, content like birds flown home to their loft. View to cherry orchard trees in blossom soft And to France on the distant sea horizon: She gazes and thinks and daydreams on and on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/7/2011 12:17:00 PM
I have heard of it, and you make it sound so quaint and lovely. A very well deserved win and thanks for catching my typo for me.
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Date: 5/6/2011 4:09:00 AM
You have painted such a beautiful, vivid picture with this Winning entry, Sydney. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:47:00 PM
makes me remember my 2 -month long trip that stretched from spain, portugal, amserdam to prague and all... a visual delight, syd with happy congrats for the wowie win! :) huggs
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Date: 5/5/2011 6:17:00 PM
Sydney, Great to see you poem's success in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your honored poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Syd. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:30:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your fantastic win in the vacation contest with this fine adventure.. enjoy another win with luv..
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:04:00 PM
So happy to see your terrific poem in the winners' circle, Syd. Congratulations! Now get ye to Sussex and tell us how the trip went. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Sydney
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations Syd on your 8th place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 5:38:00 PM
I sure would love to see such a quint village as Rye, Sydney. It would be like walking into a fairyland. The soft beds, tea and crumpets, grandfather clocks...what a special vacation! Your wife has the right idea. Start planning your trip! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2011 10:22:00 AM
Brilliant, I've been to Rye it small and very traditional. Thanks for the comment. you had me woried for a moment when I saw Syd writing to Sid. I thought me split personality was trying to confuse me.
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