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Minuted wind pass'd across
like eternity has last 
seconds were passing like gloss
little spots fade in a blast 
living i in thou land 
away from my roots an own
felt the shimmer my eyes rand
want'd to flee e're were grown
want'd to see th' art of my hand
to spot thou sunset wheat fields
an speed an hug open arms
an see e're offering thou shields
finally sail my ship with yardarms
an hail th' ocean to praise along

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/5/2016 11:06:00 AM
coloured mist ... fragments of dream ... good ...
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Date: 10/5/2016 5:26:00 AM
Your work is magical, to me even haunting. I like it. ...Fran
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 10/5/2016 5:33:00 AM
Thank you Fran ..much gratitude .. i'll pass by in a bit :))
Date: 10/4/2016 7:04:00 PM
It is poets like you that inspire others like myself to have a go... and I thank you for that... Loved it.../|\
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 10/5/2016 5:35:00 AM
Thank you Rick .. it is one of my favorites .. spiritually ranked :))

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