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Seconds, minutes Hours make days, how do we spend them Seconds, minutes We all have our days numbered, limits How many people live to condemn Or manage a life of mayhem Seconds, minutes This is actually a Rondelet. Written: 08/06/22 I think it is my first one of these.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/7/2022 8:10:00 PM

As people say here, 'Just killing time.' What a waste!! :) gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/8/2022 6:35:00 AM

Gershon, I think the thugs above were about to do more than kill time. Apparently, they had too much leisure time on their hands to do evil. Your visit added a different dimension to my work. Thanks. Sara

Justin Abdool

Date: 8/6/2022 3:44:00 PM

A perfect explanation of time. Thanks for sharing. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2022 2:44:00 AM

Your visit is delightful, Justin. Sara

Joyce Bell

Date: 8/6/2022 2:39:00 PM

Since time waits for no one...we do our best, is all we can do. Great, blessings...luv~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2022 2:38:00 AM

I agree, Joyce. Some people do their best and others don't. Your visit was encouraging. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/6/2022 11:53:00 AM

Sadly I must stop counting the time. Lovely poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/6/2022 12:56:00 PM

Victor, Live each day to the fullest that you can personally because we never know when we could influence someone to change their ways from wrong to right. Your visits uplift. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/6/2022 6:26:00 AM

This is a form that I have never used previously, but it seems to work well. and I might give it a go. Dear Sara, your words include a great deal of insight. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/6/2022 8:28:00 AM

Sotto, I hope you try it. It is not as easy as it might seem. I enjoyed writing this one, but it did not want to go like I wanted to go with it. LOL..Happens a lot though. Sara