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THE ORIGINAL TITLE OF THE POEM WAS 'NO MORE LONELY NIGHTS' BUT IT GOT ALTERED AT THE LAST MINUTE:-)

The nights were cold and lonely, I always dreamt of you My heart was torn apart, now that we are through You were my one and only, the reason for my being You ruined me, finding you with the one you were seeing Eyes wide and tongue tied, what was I suppose to think? Raging red with jealousy, anger written in blood ink. I knew you were cheating, you couldn’t look me in the eye Then I discovered you wrapped in the arms of another guy It wouldn't have been so bad, if you just owned up and told me You knew being with two guys was my one and only fantasy I'm losing my perspectives, can't see clear through all the tears Reflections staring wide eyes in all the bedroom mirrors I thought we were forever until the end of time Now you’ve gone and cheated, you're a lying swine That's all good and well, I've got a secret of my own I've been sleeping with someone too, it's your sister Joan You think this is one big love affair, well I've got a something to tell, There is no one here but me and my pillows, so you could go to hell. So whilst you been unfaithful and been having an affair with him I’ve turned the tables on you and been sleeping with your twin Collaboration by Jan Allison, Casarah Nance and Tim Smith 10th October 2014

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Robert Johnson

Date: 10/23/2014 5:42:00 PM

A very clever collaboration. Well done by one and all. Is it just me? The air seems chilly. Oh maybe it's just Fall. Peace. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2014 5:44:00 PM

It is definitely cold we have had to put the central heating on this week:-( Hugs Jan xxx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/11/2014 10:17:00 AM

truly thumbs up excellent pen well done you all

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2014 10:40:00 AM

Thanks Liam. Collaborations are fun -I thoroughly enjoyed your recent one:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/11/2014 4:17:00 AM

Hey, friends! If I were Joan, I'd head for the hills. But please, ladies, tell me more about Tim's twin! You did a great job with this satirical write and I loved it!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2014 8:01:00 AM

From my perspective it's actually Joan's twin he was having the affair with ...I am sure if Tim had a twin he would be equally as wonderful as his brother:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2014 10:33:00 PM

hahaha, Sleeping with your twin. Which of you three thought up that last line? It's a killer!!!!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/11/2014 7:30:00 PM

although once she kissed and fell.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2014 2:43:00 AM

Glad it made you laugh Andrea but we never kiss and tell:-) hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/10/2014 4:09:00 PM

It is like we are just posting poems as an excuse to then banter with one another. I think with some of the poems people go straight to the banter before they even read the poetry or comment.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 6:03:00 PM

I fell for it hook line and stinker lol:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 5:12:00 PM

Yeah, Jan they write it with you and then mail me to say Jan took the bait. She is posting it. We got a spot to pollute with our banter.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 5:00:00 PM

No wonder you wanted me to post it! hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 4:31:00 PM

We can just do this on your poems Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 4:11:00 PM

lol I think we need a 'four musky tears' page and then we can upset no one with out banter :-) hugs jan x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/10/2014 2:38:00 PM

HAHAHAHA! It is actually very well written. It flows beautifully. No strained rhymes. Set to upbeat music it would play very well. I liked it.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 4:37:00 PM

Then yes it is jello wrestling.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 4:34:00 PM

It is jello...lol

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 4:32:00 PM

That depends, what kind of shape are you in?

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 4:30:00 PM

Is this jello wrestling?

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 4:05:00 PM

Can I be the referee?

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 3:53:00 PM

Don't dream Tim make it a reality lol :-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 3:13:00 PM

Wait..I don't know what happened...I think it was a dream...there were two girls and me..then I woke up ;)

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 3:13:00 PM

No, it is so clean it reads as one writer. That's scary.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 3:11:00 PM

No I wrote the boy parts :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 3:11:00 PM

I think I did the girl parts :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/10/2014 2:00:00 PM

Haha..I really enjoyed this one,hilarious,especially the ending: )

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 2:44:00 PM

ha ha ha Charmaine I like that about the Smith name! hee hee hee:-) hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 2:23:00 PM

It's in our blood :)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/10/2014 2:20:00 PM

In past years We used to do a collab. between about ten soupers..So yes Im sure its fun.The lady who used to organize the collab hardly posts now .Her name is Dane Ann Smith Johnson..There s always a Smith in these Orgies I see : ) .Its nice to see such collabs dears.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 2:06:00 PM

We will have to pick a day and time and have a huge group pass a long...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 2:06:00 PM

We had great fun with mails flying between the three of us Charmaine - so pleased you enjoyed the poem:-) hugs Jan xxx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/10/2014 1:58:00 PM

Im ashamed of all three of you!..lol. funny stuff....BG

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 3:53:00 PM

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 2:04:00 PM

The real title of the poem is 'No More Lonely Nights' but it was something that Tim wrote in an e mail to me and the new title was penned:-) The great thing is Barbara we don't admit to anyone who wrote which lines so can blame each other lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/10/2014 1:44:00 PM

Yes four, five, six...the more the merrier....it was a pleasure playing with you dolls...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/10/2014 2:02:00 PM

Six ,this is getting scary.In out of here : ) lol

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 1:48:00 PM

LOl Tim was great fun I agree:-) hugs jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/10/2014 1:34:00 PM

Hehe good ending :) nice to see the finished product, was pleasurous threesome :) we'll have to do it again sometime. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 5:01:00 PM

ha ha ha I do especially smothered in chocolate :-) hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 4:40:00 PM

Jan said she likes nuts.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 4:33:00 PM

Who said they were nuts?

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 4:27:00 PM

ooh i love plain chocolate bounty bars and plain choc almonds mmmmm hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 4:13:00 PM

My favorite is Almond Joy. I love dark chocolate, almonds and coconut. Just to be clear that is COCO nut, not TIM's nuts.

Casarah Nance
Date: 10/10/2014 3:23:00 PM

my favorite is three musketeers, how fitting

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 2:00:00 PM

I've still got 2 in the fridge:-) hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 1:50:00 PM

need a snickers bar :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 1:47:00 PM

Ohh you have got stamina Tim:-) hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 1:45:00 PM

Give me thirty minutes and I'll be up for another go around :)