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Tilted Dahlias --The Artist

The sage green wall had worn a blank look until, slightly askew, with a tilt to the left dangling helplessly, without a complaint is the pride of an artist, who lacked all constraints. He dipped into his paints with no sense of restriction hung it in place without hesitation giving the viewer a crick of the neck. It hangs precariously, for an eager assessment without circumspection, neither yes's or no's... No hemming or hawing just helter and skelter Instead, a take me or leave me,... is the quick estimation Conforming was no issue, just pure bold assumption Excitement exploded from two eager hands that thrust it in place, with assured restless haste, hammered a nail with pride and conviction and planted it there, with pure ardent fervor Sharing a warmth of a seasonal decade.... this amateurish, yet delightful landscaped intrusion sings in the sunshine, and smelling of springtime shouting with color, and sprinkled with lavender flavored with turpentine, and oil-painted rainbows In the lower left corner, is an array of dahlias, bursting with crimson, never changing or fading never thirsty for water, barren of a single, silent, dried up weed and free of decay, dismay or mold The amber was gold, the umber was bold, rust to rust, dust to dust......ash to ash With him he took all the pride that he found ...still holding the brush stroke of a satisfied smile ___________________________________ For Anthony's Contest: Favorite Artist Dedicated to someone special in my life R.I.P. 4/16/14 Revised for Anthony's Contest

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Date: 4/23/2014 8:39:00 AM
Way to go with this creative work..Congrats on your win..Don't know who the artist could be though...Sara
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Date: 4/23/2014 3:09:00 AM
Beautiful imagery a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan x
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Date: 4/22/2014 11:19:00 PM
A wonderful write Carrie ! Loved the imagery, a heartful tribute ,,, congrats on a great win !
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Date: 4/22/2014 7:19:00 PM
I so wanted to see the painting! Who was the artist Carrie? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/22/2014 3:46:00 PM
Way to go Carrie. On a second, slower reading I closed my eyes and could almost see the painting, or at least envision those tilted Dahlias. Great win.
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Date: 4/22/2014 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie!!!! :O) well deserved win... awesome poem for your favorite artist!!! ^_^
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Date: 4/22/2014 3:00:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS CARRIE.. :) GREAT WRITE.. :) i love the imagery.. and the two lines..., olive_eloisa
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Date: 4/22/2014 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie: A beautiful poetic rendition of a dedicated artist A great win!
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Date: 4/22/2014 1:51:00 PM
Beautiful Carrie Richards... Congratulations on a first place win... Verlena S. Walker
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Date: 4/18/2014 10:40:00 AM
What can I say Carrie!!! This is the work of an unconstrained artist...so rich...full, brimming with abundant use of colors and images. (last 2 stanzas a taste of Keats). has to be a fav:) // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/22/2014 2:38:00 PM
congrats on a worthy win :)
Date: 4/17/2014 1:23:00 AM
Carrie...this is beautiful....a work of art in its own right. I'm sorry for your loss. You have the memories to warm your heart, my dear. The whole piece was breathtaking, but those last two stanzas took my breath away, especially the one before the last...The first line of that stanza...encapsulate the artist's heart...as do the last two lines...Your heart...is seen in the whole piece...Your attention to detail...beauty, color, and imagery...Fantastic. You will do superbly well! Hugs
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