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Tight Lines

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I cast a line on pond to fish.
My lure plops,
and triggers circles to radiate out
as rings of ripples emanating
from the surface deformed, disfigured
by weighted lure on the end of the line.

My line sinks from view,
slack and camouflaged
by transparency.
The pond has no lines of its own,
everything is curved -
lily pads, ripples, bubbles,
and even the shoreline
is all a set of curves;
not a straight line-segment
in sight, anywhere around this pond.

But, I can think like a fish,
I know where fish are at,
where to cast, how to trick fish to bite.
I wait on end of my line,
which is slack and drooped
over a finger, listening.

Ah ha! a nibble, a peck, a bite and the fish is on!
The only line in the pond, suddenly
lifts and twangs;
the fish has taken the bait.
The rod straight and true bends to a curve,
that wiggles with tension as fish tugs and fights.

I haul in the fish, which struggles
mightily on the end of the line.
At last it is done, the fish is bagged.
The line is reeled-in, segmented
in successive curves wound on the reel,
till the line is entirely negated, coiled.

The pond sighs in relief,
happy to be rid of any and all
stray straight lines cast upon it.

The happy fisher heads back
with a fish in his bag, carrying
his rod, lures and gear home
to fish another day
with line and reel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/15/2017 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations John!
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Date: 9/15/2017 6:38:00 AM
If I had not seen your comment below, I would have thought this a very good poem about fishing. I totally missed that it's a commentary on poetry! But hey, you made fishing interesting :) Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/15/2017 1:57:00 AM
a real fisherman's tale and I love your metaphor you sure reeled me in with clever lines about writing. I too am hooked and try to bait the reads with a catchy title!:-) your congrats on your win John:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2017 11:32:00 PM
congratulations john! i think how image-rich, and verb-rich your work is. Your defi itely capture the physicality of the action with your line breaks and use of sound
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John Anderson
Date: 9/15/2017 12:03:00 AM
Actually the poem is about the demise of the formal line in modern poetry!!
Date: 9/14/2017 9:25:00 PM
Wonderful write, my friend, and I so love to fish - I have dreams of that feeling when you know something's on the other end of the line - it's magic! Problem is I always fish with my son, and he's in Cali now, (I'm in Maine) ... I tried to go alone a couple of times, but my heart wasn't in it - I just missed my boy even more. Blessings and congrats on your win, John! :-)
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Date: 8/18/2017 6:07:00 PM
There's a fine line between fishing and sitting on a bank holding onto a piece of string
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Date: 8/18/2017 2:38:00 PM
You sure have described it well John!
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John Anderson
Date: 8/18/2017 2:39:00 PM
Cheers, but strange as it may seem, it is not about fishing!

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