Tied and Tethered

I rage at formal poetry with
                       its Titanic grip on structure
                       iambic pentameter 
                       syllable counts
                       measured cadence of rhythm like a song
                       trademark pauses
I'm on the wrong side of rhymed verse, its ostrich-like curse

Landscape of rules
                         iron ring of form
                         hoops to jump through
                         haystack of needles

I want to slam the door
                          break the rules
                          upend expectations
                          that tie my hands
                          that bend my pen
                          that crease my brow

Cavalier wishing
                           to write free verse
                           that makes heat possible
                           in words, unconventional 
                           that litter the page
Wanted:
 A wanton muse      with a pulse that fertilizes the soil
                                   of a writer's parched self
                                   scriblings of rank sentiment 





Poem composed: June 7, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/27/2021 12:16:00 PM
Brian, excellent writing and congratulations on your win, peace _Constance
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/27/2021 4:34:00 PM
Hi Constance, Thanks very much for your note. The poem is really a rant + I am surprised at its placement - completely unexpected. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 6/18/2021 6:58:00 AM
I like how you think, rules be damned. For me when I read poetry Ijust want to feel something. If not, what is the point?
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/18/2021 8:24:00 AM
Hello Richard, Thank you for the comment. Yes, rules constrain me. Free verse is free form + I can concentrate on the subject at hand. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 6/11/2021 8:15:00 PM
I enjoyed this Brian, well done. That describes my wish list :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/11/2021 9:10:00 PM
Thank you Belden. It is something of a rant of frustration + not to everyone's liking. Sincere good wishes, Brian
Date: 6/7/2021 7:49:00 PM
An interesting write Brian, the page is the poets stage, free verse or rhyme doesn't matter at all, if the reader is brought to tears or laughter the poets act has made a splash… Belle
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/11/2021 9:14:00 PM
Very well noted, Belle. Oh to make that poetical splash. Rhymed verse has me stymied. I just can't seem to find words that lift + illuminate. Thank you for the visit to my page + for your message. Cheers Brian
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