Tides

lazily the waves lap the pebbles on the beach a crab scurries by to burrow beneath wet sand a prisoner of the tides

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Eric Ashford

Date: 8/31/2019 9:43:00 AM

Liked it. Simple and direct. Well done!

Ann Foster

Date: 8/28/2019 1:28:00 AM

I could feel the sand. I love the prisoner of the tides part. I love the tide pools and you can only see them at certain times of the day. So I get it. Lovely fun. Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2013 2:39:00 PM

Great descriptiveness, Francine.

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 4/2/2013 9:50:00 AM

I had a pleasant time reading your little tidal poem. Thank you for doing the green contest. It was a pleasure.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/31/2013 3:10:00 PM

nice one! i can picture it so well...

Robert Heemstra

Date: 3/31/2013 11:13:00 AM

Reading your poem I was taken back to my childhood walking the Clearwater Beach with my dad. Thanks for the read.