Tidal Wave

Tidal Wave

A rumble, a shift; deep in the abyss.
You would never even notice, a minor thing to miss.
The forces of the shock, move silently  along.
On shore, the villagers; knew nothing to be wrong.

Closer and closer, the rippling of the waves.
A voice of Mother Earth; the laws of Newton’s slaves.
On the shelf it gathers, increasing in its might.
To build a Titan’s hand, and smash a deadly plight.

Up and up the water, a wall is rising high.
Blotting out the sun and the deeply azuring sky.
So terrible the Chaos, bursting forth the dam.
Annihilating the meek; the silencing of the lamb.

In moments it had ended, Quiet was the shore.
The village and its people, Terra made no-more.
The few that did survive; For loved ones, tears did flow.
Picked up their few possessions and sought a place to go.

No matter where you are, this land you are upon,
life it does not stop, the living shall go on.
Mother Nature gives us love, I believe it is her goal.
But sometimes she is harsh, extracting a heavy toll.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 5/1/2016 1:48:00 AM
You have captured the foreboding wall of water's destruction well in this powerful poem Brian. I remember having one here in hawaii, and the worst one in Japan. If I haven't welcomed you to Poetry Soup yet, please accept my warmest welcome! #7 Aloha, Connie ; )
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Date: 5/2/2016 3:58:00 PM
I thank you on your warm welcome here. I am sorry you endured not one, but two, of these devastating events. I watched a youtube video of one in Japan which was the inspiration for this one. I had not heard of the one in Hawaii. Such a beautiful series of islands too.
Date: 4/30/2016 5:58:00 PM
She can be harsh, and the toll can be costly.... Enjoyed. Linda
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