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Tickling Wind

Giggles fill the breeze, Life’s invisible choir laughs, Tickling of the trees.

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Date: 7/9/2009 8:14:00 AM

Nice use of personification with a taste of humor. You've got me smiling with this one. I left you a Soup Mail. Have a good day. Karen

Date: 7/7/2009 10:41:00 AM

What a wonderful write. nature will always have the last laugh! .............very nice!......alopez

Date: 7/6/2009 1:41:00 PM

Superb, lighthearted and awesome image. Very well done. Regards Heidie

Date: 7/6/2009 8:21:00 AM

Like laughter coming from nature....what an enjoyable poem ! ~

Date: 7/6/2009 6:50:00 AM

This is great, Paul. Sometimes it does seem like life is a choir.

Date: 7/6/2009 6:35:00 AM

a soft breeze tickling the trees whilst laughter never ends--this is sweet,i love this tickling Haiku---:-)charma

Date: 7/6/2009 6:09:00 AM

What a creative and uplifting view. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Date: 7/6/2009 6:04:00 AM

This Haiku lifts my spirit. The trees will praise him if we don't. Sara

Date: 7/6/2009 3:19:00 AM

really cool! Raul!! jim

Date: 7/6/2009 1:57:00 AM

Clever call , Raul and well described ....

Date: 7/5/2009 10:25:00 PM

A great haiku Raul, it is absolutely wonderful, Always, Farah