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Ticked Off

Josh once had a small tick on his rear And yelled at it to get out of here So the pesky runt Crawled around front And took a long walk on a short pier

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/21/2023 10:49:00 AM

Back with big congratulations David! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2023 1:32:00 PM

David, a funny one, congratulations on your winning placement!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/2/2023 5:55:00 PM

OMG David. I laughed myself silly! LOL :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2023 5:24:00 AM

I feel for Josh. That would be not fun at all. I found a tick on me at three different times about a month or two ago. One was the lone star tick. I guess the dog was bringing them inside because I would only go outside a few minutes at a time during the day. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/30/2023 9:08:00 AM

I loved the last line most! As kids, in the Medieval Century, lol, we would tell obnoxious kids, “ to take another walk, on a short pier!” Quite a visual insult, instead of calling someone a name!! To add, enyoyed this limerick! Pangie

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/29/2023 8:18:00 PM

You didn't! --- Yes, you did! Hahahaha! Peerless penning, David. :) gw