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Tick Tock - Itty Bitty

crepitus announces itself annoyed at my impudence as I climb the stairs it speaks the language of stop, I don't flatulence trumpets my presence luckily no one is hear to breathe deep another dead language of age the sounds of decomposition make me smile for even they can fill a blank page

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/11/2014 9:50:00 PM
congrats.... Linda
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Date: 4/11/2014 5:34:00 PM
Glad to see this entertaining itty bitty on the winners list. Congratulations Debbie.
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Date: 4/11/2014 1:25:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 3nd place "Itty Bitty" poems, Debbie!! (My poem was so itty bitty that it dropped out of the contest :))) - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/11/2014 8:55:00 AM
lol...congrats on your win
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Date: 4/11/2014 8:44:00 AM
Bahahahahaha that's hilarious! Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 4/10/2014 10:35:00 PM
Debs, this is really good. Very mature writing and I was expecting it to have been written by a man, for some reason. Anyway, congrats in my contest. a job very well done.
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Date: 4/8/2014 12:49:00 PM
I love it when one is able to laugh at one's self, and the common experience that is part of being human. You were not only able to fill a blank page, but you made others smile along with you !! :)
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Date: 4/6/2014 2:34:00 PM
My apologies for not being around for a while. I've made a major but temporary move to the NW corner of the USA. Adjusting is more difficult than I thought it would be. However, I'm recovering slowly, slowly ... Jack
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Date: 4/6/2014 9:09:00 AM
I guess the trumpet is a warning so that we hold our breath. It's the silence we must be wary of. This itty bitty was fun.
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Date: 4/5/2014 6:39:00 PM
Loved the humour hear am still chuckling having read it through twice, Good luck in the contest. Jan x
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Date: 4/5/2014 4:32:00 PM
...yes ....time goes by .... ...... maybe I will find some gray hair.... :)))...still breathing ... Luck in contest , Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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