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Tick-tock Imagination Mutates Everlasting _not

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2012 6:48:00 PM

I like how you put not at the end. Do you mean it the way the young people talk saying something wonderful and then at the end attach NOT. Hope you had a great Easter, Sara.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/8/2012 3:15:00 PM

clever acrostic, sara

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/8/2012 7:14:00 AM

Wonderful acrostic on TIME, highly imaginative, jag

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/7/2012 11:05:00 PM

Sara, another wonderful acrostic.. i love time,, but, some TIMES i dont... he he..good night..pd

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/7/2012 9:34:00 PM

Wow Sara, this is an incredible write! I believe that this acrostic is the best version for this theme my friend! The best lines are, "Imagination, Mutates" cause that is so very true how time mutates in time! Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/7/2012 10:43:00 AM

profound words to ponder Sara.. see u have returned.. trust your time away was relaxing for u luv.. also a great title to uplift poem content.. happy easter blessings to u and family..

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 4/7/2012 9:23:00 AM

Enjoyed my visit today Kim and happy Easter to you and your family , Hugs , Declan xxx