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Thy Daily Ration
Jesus Lord of all compassion feed me with thy daily ration Make me as humble as can be a boon to the community So I may do what’s to be done someone folk can depend upon.
5th June 2022 Bite Size Poem no.45 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 10/26/2022 7:19:00 AM
lovley ~
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/26/2022 12:00:00 PM
Thank you Line… Belle
Date: 6/12/2022 4:22:00 AM
A Beautiful prayer and a lovely little poem . Love the title and content alike ....! A well deserved win, Belle. Congratulations!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/12/2022 4:34:00 AM
Many thanks Valsa, I’m delighted with the response to this little poem/prayer and of course the win in Line’s contest… Bless you, Belle
Date: 6/11/2022 9:37:00 PM
Congrats, first of all. I didn't know what bite size meant. Nows I know...short and sweet. Well done
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/12/2022 1:38:00 AM
Thank you for the congratulations Barbara, now that you know give the bite size poetry a go… Belle
Date: 6/10/2022 11:44:00 AM
Belle, you excel at rhyme, humility, and communicating your faith in a gentle way. I love your prayer to be someone who wants to do what needs to be done, and one folks can depend upon. I share that desire. Congrats for your top win! Blessings ~ John
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/11/2022 2:13:00 PM
John, thank you very much, I try my best to help those in need when I can. I’ve been overwhelmed by the offers of help I’ve received since I’ve been caring for my husband after his serious illness, so many kind people to call on in time of need and I’ve really needed help at times. I can tell you are someone who folk can depend on too. Bless you, Belle
Date: 6/9/2022 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest; you so well deserved. A prayer with so much compassion for humanity. Beautiful. :)Paulette
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/9/2022 11:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Paulette your lovely comments are truly appreciated… Belle :-)
Date: 6/8/2022 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on this beauty taking First Place Belle. A lovely poem to inspire others. Blessings xxoo
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/9/2022 11:48:00 PM
Thank you Connie and blessings to you in return. Belle xxoo
Date: 6/8/2022 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Framed or card would make a wonderful gift. Today, be blessed with your win...........
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/8/2022 8:24:00 AM
Thank you for that Paula, on a card it would be nice to send to those who’d appreciate these words. Thank you again for the blessing… Belle
Date: 6/7/2022 8:42:00 PM
Very simple and humble and meaningful prayer. Congratulations!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/8/2022 5:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Christuraj, I’m more than surprised that this short prayer did so well in the contest, I feel truly blessed by all the wonderful comments… Belle
Date: 6/7/2022 7:20:00 PM
You are someone that we all can depend on, Belle. I am so thankful that you are here. This is such a lovely prayer. Your thoughts are so beautiful and uplifting. Congratulations on your top placement in this contest. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/8/2022 5:10:00 AM
Brandy your words touched my heart, thank you so much, I’m thankful that you are here too along with many others no doubt. Wondrous blessings in return with hugs… Belle:-)
Date: 6/7/2022 6:30:00 PM
Hi, Bell. Congrats on your top placement. So much said in so few words. Great closing-"someone folks can depend upon".
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/8/2022 4:53:00 AM
Hi Curtis, “A message can be heard in a verse of few words” that quote just popped into my mind. Thank you for your appraisal… Belle
Date: 6/7/2022 6:22:00 PM
Belle, this is so lovely! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/8/2022 4:36:00 AM
It is a lovely surprise for me Janice, thank you very much… Belle
Date: 6/6/2022 1:40:00 AM
Beautiful prayer Belle, right now I'm praying for a bit of decent weather. Hope you had a lovely day. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/6/2022 1:42:00 AM
Me too Tom, it’s dark and miserable outside. Did have a nice day, hope you did too. Thank you… Belle
Date: 6/5/2022 10:44:00 AM
WoW! Belle, You have penned such a heartfelt/prayer entry for the contest. I found it to be well written and sincere. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your weekend:-) Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/5/2022 12:33:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, I’m very grateful for your kind words and the best wishes… Belle :-)
Date: 6/5/2022 10:34:00 AM
Nice one! Aloha!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/5/2022 12:30:00 PM
Hello Rico, thank you very much… Belle
Date: 6/5/2022 10:33:00 AM
A very compassionate prayer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/5/2022 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Victor I so appreciate your comment… Belle

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