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Thunderbird Trigger

She sits by the window for her morning crossword Coffee cup in hand struggling to find a buzzword The fresh air carries melodies so pleasantly heard Yet still she feels somewhat like a jailbird Is there anything more absurd Streaking by a Thunderbird Not the first time it’s now the third Conjuring memories easily deterred And can’t help but look sheepishly inward When gently comes to mind a keyword So she picks up her notebook her vision blurred And starts to write a poem half heard Inspired by both songbird and mockingbird Either way it holds to her soul the password Setting her heavy heart free as if sepulchered By the feeder comes fluttering a hummingbird Light and gloriously free perfectly undeterred posted on May 26, 2018 - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 7/13/2018 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is great imagery and excellent monorhyme.
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/13/2018 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Nicely written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/13/2018 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations. I enjoyed it a lot!
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thanks, Haley. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/13/2018 1:54:00 PM
Lovely monorhyme Line. Nice light touch. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thanks, Greg. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/12/2018 10:13:00 PM
An amazing and lovely monorhyme, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/12/2018 10:24:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 7/12/2018 3:04:00 PM
A brilliant feat in creating this lovely Monorhyme Line. Congratulations on your third placement! It is great being in your company my friend! : )
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Date: 7/12/2018 4:12:00 PM
Indeed, Connie. I look forward to reading everyone's winning poems.
Date: 7/12/2018 9:50:00 AM
Great imagery and thoroughly deserved win. Faux
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Date: 7/12/2018 11:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Faux. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/12/2018 9:26:00 AM
Great mono rhyme Line, would have placed higher if not for repeated words, difficult to do mono rhymes without repeating I know, so well done!
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Date: 7/12/2018 11:16:00 AM
I try not to repeat... not sure but certainly do appreciate my placement. Thank you, John.
Date: 5/27/2018 7:57:00 AM
Line, I love the story you have told with your monorhyme. It flowed so wonderfully xxoo Happy Sunday
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Date: 5/27/2018 8:30:00 AM
Thanks, Mike, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 5/26/2018 10:23:00 AM
Amazing monorhyme Line. Well done :)
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Date: 5/26/2018 11:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

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