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Thunderbird Trigger

She sits by the window for her morning crossword
Coffee cup in hand struggling to find a buzzword
The fresh air carries melodies so pleasantly heard
Yet still she feels somewhat like a jailbird
Is there anything more absurd

Streaking by a Thunderbird
Not the first time it’s now the third
Conjuring memories easily deterred
And can’t help but look sheepishly inward
When gently comes to mind a keyword
So she picks up her notebook her vision blurred
And starts to write a poem half heard
Inspired by both songbird and mockingbird
Either way it holds to her soul the password
Setting her heavy heart free as if sepulchered

By the feeder comes fluttering a hummingbird
Light and gloriously free perfectly undeterred



posted on May 26, 2018  -  RANKED 3RD

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Susan Gentry Date: 7/13/2018 7:13:00 PM Congratulations on your win. This is great imagery and excellent monorhyme. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/15/2018 4:25:00 PM Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper Date: 7/13/2018 6:07:00 PM Congratulations on your awesome win. Nicely written.... Hugs Eve Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/15/2018 4:25:00 PM Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.

Haley Fisher Date: 7/13/2018 3:20:00 PM Congratulations. I enjoyed it a lot! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/15/2018 4:25:00 PM Thanks, Haley. Most appreciated.

Greg Gaul Date: 7/13/2018 1:54:00 PM Lovely monorhyme Line. Nice light touch. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/15/2018 4:25:00 PM Thanks, Greg. Most appreciated.

Susan Ashley Date: 7/12/2018 10:13:00 PM An amazing and lovely monorhyme, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/12/2018 10:24:00 PM Thank you, Susan, for your lovely visit and comment.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/12/2018 3:04:00 PM A brilliant feat in creating this lovely Monorhyme Line. Congratulations on your third placement! It is great being in your company my friend! : ) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/12/2018 4:12:00 PM Indeed, Connie. I look forward to reading everyone's winning poems.

Fauxcroft Wade Date: 7/12/2018 9:50:00 AM Great imagery and thoroughly deserved win. Faux Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/12/2018 11:14:00 AM Thank you so much, Faux. Most appreciated.

John Hamilton Date: 7/12/2018 9:26:00 AM Great mono rhyme Line, would have placed higher if not for repeated words, difficult to do mono rhymes without repeating I know, so well done! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/12/2018 11:16:00 AM I try not to repeat... not sure but certainly do appreciate my placement. Thank you, John.

Mike Gentile Date: 5/27/2018 7:57:00 AM Line, I love the story you have told with your monorhyme. It flowed so wonderfully xxoo Happy Sunday Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/27/2018 8:30:00 AM Thanks, Mike, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Heidi Sands Date: 5/26/2018 10:23:00 AM Amazing monorhyme Line. Well done :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/26/2018 11:41:00 AM Thank you very much, Heidi, for your much appreciated visit and comment.