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Thunder Love In Me

Oh take me to that place I long to go
where fantasy breaks out of gilded cage
the wanton ways of pleasure I must know
when pent up passion is allowed to rage

Come enter in the garden of my need
where succulence awaits in fruit so sweet
Let fingers circle round and dip in greed
awaiting time to taste of lover's treat

With cherry flavored essence gloss your lips
as fingers tug your hair in urgency
hold tight to curves of undulating hips
as I indulge my sensual revelry

Now thunder love in me with manly might
As passion takes us to that burst of light

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 6/18/2015 3:13:00 AM
- Sensual and very hot - A wonderful poem, Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2015 12:11:00 AM
Dammit, Eileen, I've just had a shower, now I've gotta go and take another cold one! Voluptuous write, young Lady. Viv x
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Date: 6/17/2015 11:39:00 AM
love the tittle, enjoyed this write... luv p.d.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 5:57:00 PM
Thanks, PD. Glad to have a visit from you. Hugs
Date: 6/17/2015 9:41:00 AM
This is ooh la la hot! ;0)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 10:11:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. :)
Date: 6/17/2015 9:22:00 AM
no one does sensual the way you do, eileen! this one is masterful...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 5:58:00 PM
:) Glad you liked it, Ilene. This is a place where I can write my little heart out...I'm glad I'm not the only one who writes sensual poetry, but it sure feels good to have that adjective to cheer me up...MASTERFUL. ;) You are a dear.
Date: 6/16/2015 4:21:00 PM
I agree with Njeri - to me the queen of passion :-) hugs Jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 4:11:00 AM
Love the title, Jan....Manifold thanks, Hon. I need to write....My favorite topic. Hugs
Date: 6/16/2015 3:09:00 PM
Wow Eileen, this is very hot. You are the queen of sensual words:-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 5:58:00 PM
Thanks, sweetie. I appreciate the title. HUGS! :)
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