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Thunder Love In Me

Oh take me to that place I long to go
where fantasy breaks out of gilded cage
the wanton ways of pleasure I must know
when pent up passion is allowed to rage

Come enter in the garden of my need
where succulence awaits in fruit so sweet
Let fingers circle round and dip in greed
awaiting time to taste of lover's treat

With cherry flavored essence gloss your lips
as fingers tug your hair in urgency
hold tight to curves of undulating hips
as I indulge my sensual revelry

Now thunder love in me with manly might
As passion takes us to that burst of light

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 3:13 AM
- Sensual and very hot - A wonderful poem, Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:11 AM
Dammit, Eileen, I've just had a shower, now I've gotta go and take another cold one! Voluptuous write, young Lady. Viv x
A   Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 11:39 AM
love the tittle, enjoyed this write... luv p.d.
Manassian Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Thanks, PD. Glad to have a visit from you. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 9:41 AM
This is ooh la la hot! ;0)
Manassian Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Thank you, Richard. :)
Bauer Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 9:22 AM
no one does sensual the way you do, eileen! this one is masterful...
Manassian Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 5:58 PM
:) Glad you liked it, Ilene. This is a place where I can write my little heart out...I'm glad I'm not the only one who writes sensual poetry, but it sure feels good to have that adjective to cheer me up...MASTERFUL. ;) You are a dear.
Allison Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 4:21 PM
I agree with Njeri - to me the queen of passion :-) hugs Jan xx
Manassian Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 4:11 AM
Love the title, Jan....Manifold thanks, Hon. I need to write....My favorite topic. Hugs
Hunjeri Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Wow Eileen, this is very hot. You are the queen of sensual words:-)
Manassian Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 5:58 PM
Thanks, sweetie. I appreciate the title. HUGS! :)
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