Len Gasun Poet Dramatic Monologue

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11.40 pm   March 22, 2025

Thrust In The Center Of The Storm

Thrust in the center of the storm,
all I could see was you;
Brewing at the zenith of your strength,
so hard to get through.
But I dared rising up
and chose to let you go,
before ruining my life
 and lead me to an absolute fiasco.

You’ve embraced more 
yourself and your vices,
Always coming home intoxicated
All you’ve were void promises               
Inflicting sufferings, bruises…
I couldn’t endure anymore. 
So exhausted!

Thrust in the center of the storm,
all I could see was you;
Cyclone’s eye was at your throne
thrusting me so harshly to,
But I was fervor enough
to ask resilience from up above;
Survived by His grace,
I've moved on easily lifting my face.
Having found a peaceful life
I’ll rebuke my license as your wife
Your daughter and I will be together
I can be both her mother and father.

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Len Gasun May 1, 2025 at 4:07 PM Thrust in the centre of the storm, all I could see was you Contest Judged: 4/23/2025 9:43:00 AM Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon Place 1 (1-4 multi-w & 1HM)

Linda Alice Fowler April 27, 2025 at 7:28 AM Wow Len my friend. You've captured the intense storm and weathered through its ferocity. Your strength and determination shines through. hugs and Congratulations! :) Len Gasun May 7, 2025 at 12:44 AM Thank you so much belatedly my dear poet friend Linda for reading my poem, your insightful words and warm congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. I'll visit you soon, I promise. Hugs

Sara Kendrick April 26, 2025 at 4:44 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Storms are scary, some very dangerous with some deaths, injuries and destruction of property. It is good to have a stronghold to lean on. Sara K Len Gasun May 7, 2025 at 12:46 AM You're right my dear poet friend. Thank you so much for reading my poem, your insightful comments and warm congratulatory greetings. Blessings to you always. I'll visit you soon, I promise. Hugs

Susan Ashley March 22, 2025 at 10:38 AM Dear Len, my friend and soulful poet, your poem is a powerful rebuke to abuse and tells of a poignant recapture of one's life. It takes courage to lift one's face and find a peaceful life after living with abuse and your intimate verse portrays this determination to make a better, safer life for oneself and child (children) with both strength and tenderness. I stand with your poetic voice rejecting abuse, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Len Gasun March 23, 2025 at 5:09 AM Thank you so much dearest soulful firned for reading my poem and your insightful comment. Thank you so much for your support. Warm wishes to you too. I'll visit your page very soon ok. Blessings and hugs