Thrust In The Center Of The Storm

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Thrust in the center of the storm, all I could see was you; Brewing at the zenith of your strength, so hard to get through. But I dared rising up and chose to let you go, before ruining my life and lead me to an absolute fiasco. You’ve embraced more yourself and your vices, Always coming home intoxicated All you’ve were void promises Inflicting sufferings, bruises… I couldn’t endure anymore. So exhausted! Thrust in the center of the storm, all I could see was you; Cyclone’s eye was at your throne thrusting me so harshly to, But I was fervor enough to ask resilience from up above; Survived by His grace, I've moved on easily lifting my face. Having found a peaceful life I’ll rebuke my license as your wife Your daughter and I will be together I can be both her mother and father.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/27/2025 7:28:00 AM

Wow Len my friend. You've captured the intense storm and weathered through its ferocity. Your strength and determination shines through. hugs and Congratulations! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2025 4:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Storms are scary, some very dangerous with some deaths, injuries and destruction of property. It is good to have a stronghold to lean on. Sara K

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/22/2025 10:38:00 AM

Dear Len, my friend and soulful poet, your poem is a powerful rebuke to abuse and tells of a poignant recapture of one's life. It takes courage to lift one's face and find a peaceful life after living with abuse and your intimate verse portrays this determination to make a better, safer life for oneself and child (children) with both strength and tenderness. I stand with your poetic voice rejecting abuse, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Len Gasun
Date: 3/23/2025 5:09:00 AM

Thank you so much dearest soulful firned for reading my poem and your insightful comment. Thank you so much for your support. Warm wishes to you too. I'll visit your page very soon ok. Blessings and hugs