Thru Chaos Thru Calm

From light to dark to light the world spins but I am still struck down in enchantment relieved of free will emblazoned I'm filled with desire your blues barely bat the shimmers off my wake and I take hold of your peel pumped full of my fire my kisses diverge I dwell deep in your lair ~ caressing your soul each boundry of touch renders us whole ~ the rattles they're heard but get rocked back to bed imeresed in a mind behind lips that have bled thru choas, thru calm indentured these chains locked tight to your gasps where beauty remains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 9/29/2018 6:16:00 AM
That is very beautiful my friend, I love that last stanza
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Date: 9/26/2018 9:41:00 AM
Passionately living is on the only way. Always good and interesting!
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Date: 9/24/2018 5:35:00 PM
Beautiful, loved the way it way put together, you are very good!
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Date: 9/20/2018 1:44:00 PM
Loved the last verse Tim, well done...
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Date: 9/17/2018 4:52:00 PM
Your choice of words are so unique, Tim. How do you do it, bro? Come on, what's your secret? Lol... Lovely write
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Date: 9/17/2018 12:43:00 AM
Ooh la la! You really took it home with that “gasps” Line!
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Date: 9/16/2018 4:31:00 PM
Beautiful, liked the 2 last lines, ah if only..................
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Date: 9/16/2018 12:25:00 PM
Beautifully written Tim :)
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