Through the Fire

Golden Sphinx on its wings, 
soaring high, soaring high,
smouldering smoke all around,
flying to azure sky.

Gleaming white, the horses neigh
victory be our desire!
strike the cymbals, draw the swords,
let Sun glisten on sapphire!

Chorus 
       through the fire, through the fire! 
       riding through the fields  of fire!


Tarry not, the time is ripe, 
we have all we require,
golden sphinx circles around, 
he is on  to enemy lair.

March on! through blinding smoke, 
know no fear, nor quagmire,
Hope greets, where the brave go,
raise the victory to admire!

Chorus
        through the fire, through the fire 
         riding through the fields  of fire!

4th placement
Chariots of Fire, Lyric song contest
Sponsor John Hamilton
Written 24/07/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/9/2020 6:38:00 AM
Your creativity is top notch with the imagination you weave. The opening with the Golden Sphinx flying high gives such a grand touch to your emotions. Congratulations on your win Krish :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/9/2020 6:48:00 AM
Thanks Aditi! Happy to be recognised and such an inspiring movie and theme! Much appreciate your kind comments. BW Krish
Date: 8/9/2020 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning lyrics, Krish.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/9/2020 6:14:00 AM
Jenna, Thank you so much! Kind regards.
Date: 8/9/2020 5:09:00 AM
Beautifully done, Krish:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/9/2020 5:47:00 AM
Thank you my friend! Pleased you visited my page and for your feedback!! Regards
Date: 8/8/2020 10:05:00 PM
Hats off for your creative write and congratulations for your win ~ John
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/8/2020 11:39:00 PM
Thanks John! Honoured to receive such praise and your words always cheer me up! God bless, kind regards.
Date: 8/8/2020 7:20:00 PM
Thanks Krish for this beauty of a write, congrats on a nice placement!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/8/2020 11:36:00 PM
Thanks John! Pleased you liked it! Thanks for another inspiring contest!
Date: 7/25/2020 3:00:00 PM
I like your lyrics. Well expressed.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/25/2020 9:51:00 PM
Thank you Richard! Writing words to popular music is an interesting challenge. Hope John likes it too:)
Date: 7/25/2020 7:43:00 AM
A wonderfully composed Lyric. Loved the Sphinx reference... Great title, fine flow and a brilliant creation ! Good luck in that contest my friend. A fav.. God bless..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/25/2020 10:18:00 AM
Thanks Very much Robert! A fave is great! Delighted!:)
Date: 7/24/2020 2:56:00 PM
You certainly know how to compose a lyric Krish, best of luck in the contest Enjoy your weekend Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/24/2020 10:59:00 PM
Thanks Tom Inspiring song and music! Greetings my friend!
Date: 7/24/2020 2:39:00 PM
Excellent entry Krish! I think John should love this one! Blessings xxoo
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/24/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Connie! Wrote at 3 am, after listening to the music the night before. Let’s hope it is to John’s expectations.
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