Through Seasons

Is not life a mystery too deep to fathom and is not man, a part of the cosmic soul? passing through stages four, human life completes its cyclic scroll starting with innocent childhood, in time, our life passes through youth and middle age and ends up in crippling old age, precisely as the seasons envisage! each stage has its thrills and fills marked by distinct traits and quirk. if childhood is an age of play, youth, a transition from play to work. middle age- a time when passions are tempered and old age, time for a shift from work to rest. thus life in time sprouts, blooms, fades and ebbs away, as plants through the four seasons manifest! each stage is a link in the long chain of life and birth and death, just doorways in and out life after completing its earthly round, shall enter a world beyond the reach of thought. can we still say life is an empty dream? sure, we wake to sleep and sleep to wake and the cycle goes on and on, relentless just as the seasons repeat without mistake! July.9.2022 Time between the Seasons Poetry Contest Sponsor- Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 7/12/2022 12:29:00 PM
Lovely rhyming in this intriguing poem, Valsa. I liked it! Bill
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Date: 7/12/2022 3:39:00 AM
This poem is a winner in any contest.
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Date: 7/11/2022 11:58:00 AM
The seasons of life, the seasons of a year , the seasons of our poetic progression, sef understanding, maturity and realization are all a journey. Exquisite poem my friend Valsa. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 7/11/2022 2:44:00 AM
Two years after my retirement, all hell broke loose. However I like the descriptions of change of season.
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Date: 7/10/2022 2:37:00 AM
I like the way you went with this one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. I do agree our lives are divided into seasons of time. Your visits to my page always uplift. Sara
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Date: 7/9/2022 9:38:00 PM
Beautiful, Valsa! I love these lines: thus life in time spouts, blooms, fades and ebbs away, as plants through the four seasons manifest. ~ Best of luck in contest! You should do really well.
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Date: 7/9/2022 9:10:00 PM
Love your take on the four seasons... Just one question, Valsa: When does youth end?! ~ 72, going on 27
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Date: 7/10/2022 1:13:00 AM
72 is pecisely the age when youth starts..... not for everyone, but for special people like Gershon :)
Date: 7/9/2022 7:31:00 PM
Love this, Valsa a recipe for a lifetime.
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Date: 7/9/2022 6:02:00 PM
Some of us need to live a long time to learn we reap what we sow . . . .Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 7/9/2022 3:07:00 PM
Valsa, you have an incredible sense of rhyme and flow, and they combine to create something that is absolutely breathtaking. This is excellent poetry, and reading it is such a pleasure because of the great metaphors and insight you use. Blessings to you, my dear friend.
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Date: 7/9/2022 1:34:00 PM
Great pen Valsa takes us through the stages of life, with great rhyme and flow making it truly stunning. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 7/9/2022 6:59:00 AM
Thanks for the ride through the stages Valsa. You've captured the essence of each. All best in the contest! Linda
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Date: 7/9/2022 5:24:00 AM
Expertly penned poem, Valsa, traversing through the stages of life. Everyone can relate to your thoughts having experienced the ebb and flow of life. Best to you for a TOP win.
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Date: 7/9/2022 2:08:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Valsa, you rose to the challenge well, just back from Turkey on a dreaded night flight, don't know if I'm coming or going. Have a great weekend. Tom
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Date: 7/9/2022 1:51:00 AM
Wonderful vision and imagery. Just a joy to read. Love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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