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Rip Tide

In low tide I stand feeling the pull of the sea against my ankles. My saffron and oyster life passes before my own eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/14/2017 12:10:00 PM
Oh, this sounds like the life to me. Can't wait until it cools off so I can have bowl of clam chowder. This is a great poem Dale. It evokes a lot of nostalgia and emotion. -- Dean
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/14/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Dean! I LOVE clam chowder!
Date: 8/13/2017 1:02:00 PM
This is written well Dale, leaves me feeling like I am standing in the tide too. Nice :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/13/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 8/13/2017 11:32:00 AM
such tranquil lines Dale and I love the saffron and oyster line especially:-) hugs jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/13/2017 11:39:00 AM
Thanks, Jan!

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