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Three Tribes

‘‘Twas in those mountains of south Scillies lived three tribes, first was the silly Bybillies, men wear fancy frocks, women wear frillies second of the tribes were tough big bullies, they were known as mountain Blowbillies so tough they eat tons of red hot chillies, third of the tribes grew roses and tiger lilies this friendly group best known as Hillbillies, wild and free never visited any big cities one night all three tribes met at uncle willies he had the very best barn and good facilities, sadly a fight broke out between Blowbillies Hillbillies and Bybillies caused awful activities, Bybillies ate all the Blowbillies red hot chillies, Blowbillies were all wearing frocks and frillies, Hillbillies were all smelling of roses and lilies. 5/8/2018

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 5/10/2018 8:28:00 AM

Congrats on an awesome witty depiction of the three different tribes of "billies" Roy!~Che :)

Roy Pett
Date: 5/11/2018 5:06:00 AM

Thank you for your congratulations and very kind comment Cheryl, really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))

Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2018 12:21:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your monorhyme, Roy :) . Congratulations on your awesome great write..Hugs Eve

Roy Pett
Date: 5/9/2018 1:27:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve, I really appreciate your very kind comment so pleased you enjoyed, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/8/2018 8:15:00 PM

rhythmic all the way, roy... a poetic delight!...huggs

Roy Pett
Date: 5/9/2018 3:55:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment nette, it’s a delight and heartwarming to receive comments as this from an accomplished poet, thanks again for your support and encouragement.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/8/2018 8:10:00 AM

Great monorhyme Roy, you done it well. Id heard of hillbillies but not the others.good luck. Tom

Roy Pett
Date: 5/8/2018 9:53:00 AM

Thanks Tom for your very kind comment and best wishes really appreciated, I read Hillbillies originated in Scotland they were a rifle Corp. the other two are made up by the contest sponsor, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/8/2018 7:43:00 AM

Well done Monorhyme Roy! Good luck in the contest :)

Roy Pett
Date: 5/8/2018 9:48:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Heidi, your support and encouragement is so welcome and heart warming. :))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/8/2018 7:11:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this fun poem Roy--wonderful imagination and articulation..hope this wins BIG!

Roy Pett
Date: 5/8/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay, your kindness is really appreciated, I’m usually unsure of my poems when entering them in contests especially this one so to receive a comment from an amazing poet such as you certainly raises my hopes, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2018 5:54:00 AM

Great humour and rhyme Roy, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 5/8/2018 6:06:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I wanted to enter this contest but did find it difficult which is possibly a good thing taxing the old gray matter so not expecting to make a placement, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))