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Three Times a Day

Not sure how he does it three times a day
But all the ladies stop by for a stay
He grins and he smiles
They stay quite awhile
Hurry back Jack, I cant keep them at bay

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2015

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May 27, 2015 at 3:23 PM

Ha, Ha, Ha, you are full of it my pen friend.....Sharon G.

May 14, 2015 at 3:57 AM

Ha ha.only 3 times a day?. wonderful. er couldn't spare a lady could you. just one will do. ha ha. great write best wishes. Pete.

May 13, 2015 at 8:07 PM

Oh Tim... you'll have young Jack chaffing at the bit here with your pleading, but I dare say all will be well when he returns with a mountain of ideas - Enjoyed - the banters great - Lindsay

May 13, 2015 at 3:28 PM

lol! Funny...

May 13, 2015 at 3:32 PM

Just wait for tomorrow's version.... I've been laughing for an hour

May 13, 2015 at 11:49 AM

busy man lol, enjoyed your fun write Tim ~luv, SKAT~

May 13, 2015 at 3:31 PM

Thanks Skat

Barbara Gorelick

May 13, 2015 at 10:14 AM

Cute, do you think he takes a supplement? HAHA. BG

May 13, 2015 at 3:31 PM

He uses a tablet I hear

May 13, 2015 at 9:39 AM

Whatta problem to have!!! I LOVE the ladies but you probably have guessed that!!!

May 13, 2015 at 9:42 AM

That is a nice problem... Lol

Charmaine Chircop

May 13, 2015 at 9:12 AM

Oh, Hurry Back Jack and take them away...Lol : )

Charmaine Chircop

May 13, 2015 at 9:23 AM

Oh nope,but it would change all the meaning if you change anything..My line was just another option,jk. of course. : )

May 13, 2015 at 9:16 AM

Is this a workshop poem : )

May 13, 2015 at 9:15 AM

I like your ending

May 13, 2015 at 9:14 AM

Lol..yep he can have his ladies...I got mine : )

May 13, 2015 at 9:07 AM

ha ha ha - he is on some sort of tablets for it I guess Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

May 13, 2015 at 9:09 AM

Must be....lol

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