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Three Squared Poetry Invented By Jane Dougherty - Comfortable With Love

COMFORTABLE WITH LOVE ~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~ walking by my side... my discovered her fragrance... memories recovered rapturous pain... ecstasy plundered numbered are our day's old age enjoys finding different, loving, lasting ploys no, what are you thinking, not sex toys destroys thoughts of impending pleasure we take our time, time, at our leisure comfort in love, always a treasure ~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~ Three Squared Poetry Invented by Jane Dougherty

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Bernard Chan

Date: 11/18/2017 5:52:00 PM

Blissful . . . love the humorous touch with the "sex toys". The last stanza is a gracious summation of what being with someone you love is all about. Well-done!

Mick Talbot
Date: 11/18/2017 6:36:00 PM

Thanks Bernard, pleased you found it blissful, and yes true love is a treasure, priceless.