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Three Rings Entice a Perfect Fit

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trinity rings

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Each ring alone too big to fit, slips on finger, disclosing its excess. Too tight the hold, the urge to control. Too much the hope to fill the void, the more it squeezes, the embrace to yield. But, when entwined and combined, the three rings loop and interface to make a perfect fit for finger. A trinity in harmony.

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Date: 5/28/2025 2:35:00 PM
THIS IS SO CREATIVE. I'M REALLY LOVING IT. The first stanza kicks the whole thing off with a bang. Way to write ... CayCay
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Date: 5/28/2025 3:35:00 PM
Thanks very much for your feedback. Great to receive it. Cheers

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