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trinity rings

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Three Rings Entice a Perfect Fit

Each ring alone
too big to fit,
slips on finger,
disclosing its excess.

Too tight the hold,
the urge to control.
Too much the hope 
to fill the void, 
the more it squeezes,
the embrace to yield.

But, when entwined and combined,
the three rings loop and interface
to make a perfect fit for finger.
A trinity in harmony.
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Godwin Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 2:35 PM
THIS IS SO CREATIVE. I'M REALLY LOVING IT. The first stanza kicks the whole thing off with a bang. Way to write ... CayCay
Anderson Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 3:35 PM
Thanks very much for your feedback. Great to receive it. Cheers
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