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Three Nights, Two Days

A two day dream flying over meadows in shear peace I landed on my feet in the town square on Wall Street I talked to a lady who invited me inside We had barbecue chicken for lunch, with apple pie I then flew to the Twin Towers and landed on top Looking around for hours, hoping I wouldn't wake up I flew in circles to the Statue of Liberty Her colors changed as the sun went down, to a bright green How could the sun come up and then go down in a dream? This was too surreal, and the ocean's glow set the theme I flew back to California, just above the ground I woke up so amazed and wrote this awesome dream down

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Date: 5/25/2010 11:07:00 PM
That is one amazing dream! To be able to go those places and see those views from the top (& minus the traffic too!) Glad you came up with an great poem to share with us! I never dream of myself flying though, isn't that odd?
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:18:00 PM
Mitch, your poem is a joy to read. WOW, what a dream, awesome. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/13/2010 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your take on the photo, and a fifth place Mitch. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/13/2010 10:58:00 AM
Congrats Mitch on your winning poem in the Phoenix Rising contest with this wonderful Rhyme depicting the photo presented perfectly .. enjoy another great win my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/13/2010 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your success in the contest, Mitch. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2010 12:05:00 PM
Hey good luck in the contest Mitch with this one for Carolyn... hope all is OK with u as have not heard from u in a while...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/9/2010 4:54:00 PM
sounds like that photo/contest great write!!
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Date: 5/6/2010 9:22:00 AM
Hey Bro, thnx for always leaving comments on my writes...as you know, always appreciate it...Jimmy
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Date: 5/6/2010 9:20:00 AM
Unforgatable dream, Mitch..when you have time pls. post it on PP..would love to read it..still can't write about that horror..had just visited NYC the prior weekend to 911..Peace, audrey
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Date: 5/6/2010 6:17:00 AM
I had this dream in 1991= It reads 2 pages long- and yes I could fly anywhere I wanted for 2 days straight- Good times
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:11:00 AM
i like that Medieval brat, fits me well, i have all the time in the world, after all I am a 27 yer old brat. I love it Mitch,..p.d.
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:05:00 AM
This is truly an incredible dream, Mitch. Memories of the twin towers will always linger in my mind. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:03:00 AM
Great couples...It had to be a dream for the twin towers are gone..Sara
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Date: 5/6/2010 3:34:00 AM
Good morning Mitch, what a dream you just had , a very strong dream. I suppose your dreams are more wild than my imaginations, a pleasure to have read this morning,..p.d.
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