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Three Kids--Hc

three kids hide-and-seek as night ebbs...two disappear leaving one alone Giggles crack when two hands brush the one dazed Reveling on pranks, a threesome amazed! ..................... 2/26/2019 Charliecoup Contest of charles messina

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2019 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on a great Haiku & Couplet, Nette. ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2019 4:40:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win :) -

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2019 3:04:00 PM

this was a cute image of hide and seek! Congrats on the win,nette.

Charles Messina

Date: 3/6/2019 2:29:00 PM

Feel the warmth in this, lovely poem, Nette. Congratulations on your win. hugs // Charlie :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/2/2019 6:21:00 PM

Great idea for the contest, always loved hide-n-seek as a kid!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/2/2019 5:04:00 AM

Beautifully done! I had not entered this one, now there is pretty much no point. I can see your horse now with the garland of flowers around her neck. And not such a dark horse, more of the obvious horse.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/27/2019 11:11:00 PM

Hi Nette, Ohooooooo I really like this definitely, best for a win! Have never tried my hand at this kind of poetry, maybe I'll give it a bash! Think yours will sweep us all clean though, its cute and awesome Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/27/2019 3:09:00 PM

It brought me back in time Nette. Good one :)

Paul Callus

Date: 2/27/2019 2:42:00 PM

I love your take on this contest theme, Nette! Unfortunately not all childhood games manage to retain their identity! Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2019 12:39:00 PM

- Lovely and playful, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/27/2019 12:36:00 PM

Cute one nette, well written, good luck. Tom

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/27/2019 12:08:00 PM

Fun take on the challenge, nette. Superbly done.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/27/2019 11:30:00 AM

This is DELIGHTFUL Nette! A winner for me :) good luck in the contest! xomo <3

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/27/2019 11:25:00 AM

Hi Nette, This is a good entry for the contest theme. I could just picture theme playing hide and seek. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis