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f i s h i n g in the fissure i n f i n i t e l y seeking never finding gold **************** it was on the surface her g * * * * * * * * * * o * * * * * * * * * l * * * * * * * * d * * * * * * * e n eyes which he dismissed c a r e l e ss l y *************** out of the blue sky happiness found her true love * r f e o v r e after

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Date: 5/3/2025 12:26:00 AM
So nice. A fairy tale ending!
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Date: 5/2/2025 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful/fun write. Have a lovely day writing away with your win..........
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Date: 5/2/2025 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations dear poetess on your high placement in Brian`s poetry contest with a superb triple Hiku with deep thinking. Wish you a forthcoming weekend filled with wonderful light.
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Date: 5/2/2025 9:48:00 AM
Love it, so full of intensity - "fishing in the fissure"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2025 10:50:00 AM
Thank you! xx
Date: 5/2/2025 5:49:00 AM
Well, you've upped the ante here Kim! I started thinking about Snow White singing at the wishing well as I read. Excellent entry and sure winner! x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2025 7:00:00 AM
I love how we bounce off each other! We are so much more creative together! Whistle a happy tune! Hugs

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