Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Three Grey Cats

Singing sparrows in a tree,
Fading moon in a dawn sky.
A girl woke in her bed and found three,
Three grey cats. Kissing each head, oh sigh!
Do you want a warm cup of sweet tea?
Oh yes, we do, three did cry!


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June 21, 2015

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For the contest, Quatrets, sponsor, Isaiah Zerbst

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Laura Leiser July 30, 2015 at 2:56 PM SO cute, BW! Congrats on your win :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 30, 2015 at 1:34 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning work BW! Amazing pen my friend!

Lee Carter July 29, 2015 at 10:59 AM Sweet poem BW congrats on your win!~lee

Afolabi Muideen June 23, 2015 at 2:30 AM Beautiful write BW I like the form of the poem and it excellent for the contest.. Good luck.............A.M.

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2015 at 9:30 PM Constance, I looked it over for punctuation. Where you are using phrases sometimes instead of complete sentences, punctuation gets tricky. I think it looks fine how it is. I am sure the judge will think so too! Constance La France June 22, 2015 at 10:27 PM oh thanks Andrea, yes the punctuation in this one was a bit tricky and you are the expert punctuation person so thank you so much for letting me know this is okay . . . you are the best

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2015 at 3:50 PM HOw sweet, Constance. I really do have to check out this form of Isaiah's. I read it quickly the other day and did not quite understand it. Keep bringing on the adorable kitty poems!!

Sara Kendrick June 22, 2015 at 3:07 PM I like the flow and rhythm of this one plus a great topic as well..Very nice picture to spring from or to match your work..Sara..Thanks for stopping by...

Richard Lamoureux June 22, 2015 at 8:22 AM It's unanimous, lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 22, 2015 at 3:27 AM - A lovely poem B.W. ...... and a sweet picture - Good luck in the contest, and have a wonderful day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley June 22, 2015 at 12:41 AM More lovelier than a lovely thing that has just arrived from the planet lovely in its lovelymobile. Viv x

Kelsi Nichols June 21, 2015 at 11:33 PM ADORABLE !! This poem is sugar sweet -Kelsi c:

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 21, 2015 at 10:58 PM Lovely, Constance! This reminds me of a classic nursery rhyme like Mother Goose and was fun to read...hugs, Rhonda