Three Grey Cats

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Singing sparrows in a tree,
Fading moon in a dawn sky.
A girl woke in her bed and found three,
Three grey cats. Kissing each head, oh sigh!
Do you want a warm cup of sweet tea?
Oh yes, we do, three did cry!


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June 21, 2015

Quatrets Rhyme

For the contest, Quatrets, sponsor, Isaiah Zerbst

Fifth Place

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Laura Leiser

Date: 7/30/2015 2:56:00 PM

SO cute, BW! Congrats on your win :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 1:34:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning work BW! Amazing pen my friend!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/29/2015 10:59:00 AM

Sweet poem BW congrats on your win!~lee

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/23/2015 2:30:00 AM

Beautiful write BW I like the form of the poem and it excellent for the contest.. Good luck.............A.M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2015 9:30:00 PM

Constance, I looked it over for punctuation. Where you are using phrases sometimes instead of complete sentences, punctuation gets tricky. I think it looks fine how it is. I am sure the judge will think so too!

Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2015 10:27:00 PM

oh thanks Andrea, yes the punctuation in this one was a bit tricky and you are the expert punctuation person so thank you so much for letting me know this is okay . . . you are the best

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2015 3:50:00 PM

HOw sweet, Constance. I really do have to check out this form of Isaiah's. I read it quickly the other day and did not quite understand it. Keep bringing on the adorable kitty poems!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/22/2015 3:07:00 PM

I like the flow and rhythm of this one plus a great topic as well..Very nice picture to spring from or to match your work..Sara..Thanks for stopping by...