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My body is wearing out but my mind is still young. I will one day not be bound by a failing body.

The somersault and overswing, the trampoline and horse, while knees and calves still had their spring and power in legs to play the game, and strength to run their course. I go there in my mind instead, though back and bones now ache, and hips take time to floor my feet and meet the day from bed. I run, I dance, I score a try. I thrill to knock the bales, and will the ball to net. I swim, I dive and better still, is freedom now to fly. The day will come when greater ease allows me from this stall. As spirit body please, with no restraining pain or fall, end whistle of this mortal game is not my boundary wall.

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Date: 5/21/2020 12:29:00 AM
I like where you took this, Bob. Well penned.
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Bob Kimmerling
Date: 5/22/2020 4:34:00 AM
Line You have been on quite a read of my poems. i am honoured. Thank you for your various and encouraging comments which to which this one reply responds. I am fairly new to poetry, since D December 2019 when a trip to New Zealand and a new head space inspired my start. It is a great joy, and a blessing to receive comments like yours. The Lord bless and encourage you too. Bob

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