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She stood in line holding a loaf of bread, so I motion for her to go ahead. Thanking me, she started counting her change and I must admit she looked somewhat strange. She had a hand full of pennies she'd found outside, where I had thrown them on the ground. She looked hungry and was shabbily dressed, but the busy cashier was unimpressed. They didn't add up; she was three cents shy, it broke my heart when she started to cry. While I was throwing my pennies away, this poor girl didn't have enough to pay. I offered her a hundred-dollar bill and told her to keep the change from the till. And I thanked her for opening my eyes, leaving her shocked, with a look of surprise. I questioned my hypocrisy that day nonchalantly throwing money away. For I found out that even a penny, is a treasure when you don't have any. (Rhyme) 7/17/2021 Touch My Heart Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 7/21/2021 7:39:00 AM
An inspiring write, Emile! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/20/2021 8:27:00 PM
Beautiful write Emile! Laudable sentiment. First recipient gets $100 but then there’s the next & next & next. Who to favour, against whom to discriminate? ~ Really liked your thought provoking, soul searching poem, congrats on your win
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Date: 7/21/2021 5:59:00 AM
Thanks, Unseeking, a flood begins with but a single drop of rain, it is a start, not yet a downpour my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2021 8:06:00 PM
Indeed! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this muse of yours, touching heart and conscience of mine. God bless you.
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Date: 7/21/2021 5:59:00 AM
Thanks, Beata, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2021 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Poet. Your poem really touches heart. "For I found out that even a penny, is a treasure when you don't have any." - What a great ending! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 7/20/2021 5:27:00 PM
Thanks, Malabika, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2021 8:57:00 AM
Emile, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Your poem certainly touched my heart. Janice
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Date: 7/20/2021 11:08:00 AM
Thanks, Janice, your kind words touched my heart my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2021 6:09:00 AM
Such a touching write....Congrats on your win Emile :)
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Date: 7/20/2021 6:25:00 AM
Thanks, Carol, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2021 4:36:00 AM
The last four lines have a different pattern of thinking. Doing good together with sparing the penny. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/20/2021 6:24:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2021 3:48:00 AM
Love this, Emile. Beautiful write. God bless you and congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/20/2021 6:23:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.

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