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The red brick walls safeguard us from the storm soft comforter pulled up to keep us warm in our new place Oak leaves, like parachutes, fall towards the ground alighting on the shroud of snow around the bare tree's base Brand new emotions we're discovering as nurse pulls up the blanket, covering your grandma's face. // Poet's note: My wife and daughter both experienced the death of a beloved grandmother in the year their weddings occurred. Joyful and tearful memories are mingled, represented by these three blankets //

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Date: 7/7/2020 4:22:00 AM
I am so happy to see this placed #1 dear friend. Back to congratulate you on your win. Blessings :)
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Date: 7/8/2020 1:06:00 AM
Aditi, I'm amazed at how many comments you were able to make today! I hope you got something else done, too! I am grateful and honored, my friend, for all the attention. Warmest wishes ~ John
Date: 7/4/2020 7:36:00 AM
Big Congrats John to win First Place. You deserve.
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Date: 7/4/2020 11:39:00 PM
Thank you for the thoughtful words, Anisha.
Date: 7/2/2020 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Sorry about their Grandmother and sadness. Yes, you had both joyful and tearful memories that year. Your pen did a wonderful job. Enjoy your win and day...........
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Date: 7/2/2020 2:08:00 PM
Thank you for the condolences, my friend. Your words mean a lot.
Date: 7/2/2020 10:50:00 AM
This poem of grieving expresses the sadness of grief so beautifully in the metaphor of the blanket. Well done dear friend! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/2/2020 2:07:00 PM
I'm pleased you think so, Sam. I sought out a metaphor that covers both the comforts and sorrows of life. Blessings to you ~ John
Date: 7/2/2020 8:10:00 AM
A great write on a sad reality! Congrats on your win. Brilliant as ever!
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Date: 7/2/2020 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Krish, your kind words mean a lot.
Date: 7/2/2020 5:24:00 AM
Great poetry, John. Sorry to hear that both your wife and daughter had to go through that on the year of their weddings. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Charlie
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Date: 7/2/2020 1:39:00 PM
Charlie, I am grateful for the nice placement (didn't expect THAT), for you sponsoring another one of your unique challenges, and for the kind words. Have a great 4th of July weekend.
Date: 6/9/2020 1:35:00 PM
Wonderfully penned!!
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Date: 6/9/2020 2:30:00 PM
Thank you Swetha! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 6/7/2020 8:08:00 PM
I appreciate this poem very much.
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Date: 6/7/2020 8:24:00 PM
Thank you, Morgana. Your words are appreciated.
Date: 6/4/2020 6:05:00 PM
Your three blankets are three shining gems, a trifecta of tenderness and tears-
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Date: 6/4/2020 6:50:00 PM
Beautifully stated, Michelle. Thank you for all the kind words today, my friend ~ John
Date: 6/4/2020 3:28:00 PM
wow, this is deep, John. VERY well done. I have about 6 now to put up, all contests ready to close out fairly soon. Plus I have to get going on seven other contests. I totally wasted my time doing three haiku last night. Will save them for another contest I can hopefully use them in! gotta get going but I see you posted a lot recently. way to go!
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Date: 6/4/2020 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I will send a soupmail about this.
Date: 6/4/2020 1:34:00 PM
To pen the emotions of memories blended with joy and pain is difficult, yet your words smoothly flow into the heart especially with the metaphors you have used. Only you can write a verse like this one. Hope you are well dear friend. Best wishes for the contest :)
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Date: 6/4/2020 4:43:00 PM
Yes, many memories are commingled with pain and pleasure, joy and sorrow. My wife's grandmother died 2 months before our wedding. I was hard for my bride and her mother to fully experience the joy of our wedding day. Then my mother died a few months before my daughter was wed. It felt like deja vu. Thank you for your compassionate comment, Aditi.
Date: 6/3/2020 2:15:00 PM
beautifully linked, john!
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Date: 6/4/2020 4:41:00 PM
Thank you ilene, i always value your input.

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