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Threads of Ivy

Interwoven in my happiness Are threads of doubt The way the ivy on the neglected window Keeps the sunshine out; I can trim away the ivy And make the windows clear If I can climb to the top of the ladder From way down here; Even with the window clear I'll be on the outside looking in - The view is so limited And it's where everyone else has been; Gotta' get off the ladder And get back inside - But with this crystal clear view Won't I miss the threads of ivy?

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Date: 8/26/2024 11:04:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/24/2024 7:41:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup, Sandy. This is deep, contemplative reflection, superb! Depicts the human condition so wisely. Thanks for sharing.
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