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Hilo Poet's Triloet Contrast Contest... 28 Jan 25
In pure delight, I watch a world of thousand blooms, God’s tokens fall like petals crowned where hills stand tall in pure delight, I watch a world adorned with song , like saintly call a lush brocade entwined and furled-- in pure delight, I watch a world of thousand blooms, God’s tokens fall.

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Date: 2/24/2025 4:35:00 PM
Nette, you put a beautiful net on the stirring of flower petals...it's a lovely optimistic view of the world, which speaks volumes to me! Smiles!
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Date: 1/18/2025 9:31:00 PM
And not just token words I'd say.? If you are Aware of the richness in your created days.' How are things Nette.?
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Date: 1/16/2025 8:31:00 PM
A beautiful triolet, dear Nette. It is so enchanting to view the night sky where a thousand stars bloom as flowers.... also hills adorned with flowers!
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Date: 1/16/2025 8:08:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Nette. Enjoyed the refrain -
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Date: 1/16/2025 1:33:00 PM
It breaks my heart that so many bad things may ruin our happiness. Nette, A poignant and wrenching poetry. Your beautiful poetry is always a delight to read.
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Date: 1/16/2025 8:37:00 AM
Beautiful triolet, Nette. One of these days we need to chat again!
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Date: 1/16/2025 8:22:00 AM
What a lovely write you have here. "Good Luck" if for a contest.... Have a fun day as you write away..................
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Date: 1/16/2025 7:51:00 AM
Awww thats so very beautiful and so peaceful Nette! Lovely….Debx
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Date: 1/16/2025 6:33:00 AM
So dreamy. So sad that there are so many nightmares to get in the way of our bliss. Sweet poem Nette
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Date: 1/16/2025 4:41:00 AM
Great Triolet. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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