Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- Thoughts 'Tween Stars Embrace and Waters Deep Grace -

The light that dances will enchant the eyes that shine
In heaven's grace the stars illuminate God's eternity

She cannot touch them with her fingertips they are too far away
What wondrous glory fills her with desire's joy at infinity's song

Heaven's beauty ever caresses her temple as eternity now displayed
This wonderful heavenly experience, later that of damasked happiness

Sing love's song oh lady of the North in hearts most gentle tones
A journey through Cosmos gracious and mighty grateful

Oceans of love seek the light's dancing grace 
By the Fjords bank 'neath skies dance of night

The tide reaches her quickly, rising with swelling waves
And all in tune as grains of the golden sand

She is love's brightest star, in passion's light love's shining grace
Before the Northern star, in love's embrace a beauteous gem

The silence and beauty, enough time to love
Truth is deep like the bottom of the sea and far away like the stars












05.03.2018
A Collaboration by : A-L Andresen & Vladislav Raven
Thank you : Mike 
(Unrhymed Couplets )

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Keith O.J. Hunt March 18, 2018 at 1:14 PM Wonderful.... Your ink mixes very well together;-) Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2018 at 1:17 PM - Keith, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - Always a pleasure to see you :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney March 11, 2018 at 10:39 AM Wonderful collaboration between you both. The title is great and drew me in. A lot of beauty within the lines. Best, SuZ Anne-Lise Andresen March 11, 2018 at 12:34 PM - Appreciate your lovely comment, SuZ :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Melissa Tracy March 9, 2018 at 8:54 AM Beautiful collaboration you all created here..best wishes to you all :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2018 at 12:02 PM - Many thanks from both of us, Melissa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2018 at 9:28 PM Lovely...damasked happiness...perhaps inside and out! Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2018 at 2:51 AM - Many thanks from both of us, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 7, 2018 at 12:38 PM Wondrous collaboration, stunning results! Congratulations to both dearest, Anne-Lise and Vladislav Raven! Anne-Lise Andresen March 7, 2018 at 12:47 PM - So glad you liked this co-write, my friend - Many thanks for beautiful comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith March 6, 2018 at 12:37 PM Lovely collaboration you too, great work, you should do more... Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2018 at 12:40 PM - Many thanks from both of us, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2018 at 8:36 AM Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2018 at 9:34 AM - Thank you, Thank you, Thank you :)))

Ravi Sathasivam March 6, 2018 at 1:28 AM Excellent and beautiful poem. Very interesting collaboration. Thanks for sharing it. Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2018 at 3:21 AM - Appreciate your lovely comment, Ravi :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley March 5, 2018 at 8:48 PM A seamless collaboration, and lovely. Viv x Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2018 at 3:21 AM - Many thanks from both of us, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven March 5, 2018 at 5:13 PM Hi Anne-Lise, it was so wonderful to share ink with you on this write. It has been an honour and a pleasure to sing with you, something i have wanted to do for a while. Your pen ever runs gold. This one has to go into my faves. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2018 at 3:19 AM - Thank you for asking me, Mike :) - Many thanks for your "fav" :) - A joy to honor - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France March 5, 2018 at 4:04 PM Sun, this poem is so dreamy, you all did a fantastic job writing it and it blends beautifully ~ Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2018 at 3:17 AM - B. W., many thanks for your visit and comment :) - Always a pleasure to see you :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong March 5, 2018 at 3:08 PM I could recognize both your styles in this lovely collaboration Anne-Lise and Mike. Kudos to both of you on a fine meeting of the minds! xxoo : ) Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 3:13 PM - Appreciate your lovely comment, Connie :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick March 5, 2018 at 3:02 PM Interesting collaboration ..Way to go you two. Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 3:04 PM - Thank you, Sara :) - Appreciate your lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One March 5, 2018 at 2:28 PM A beautiful poem Anne Lise.. Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 2:31 PM - Many thanks from both of us, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock March 5, 2018 at 10:14 AM Beautiful poem you two. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 11:42 AM - Thank you, Phyllis :) - Appreciate your lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman March 5, 2018 at 8:07 AM Hello Anne-Lise, You and Mike ("Vlad") have done a masterful and wondrous collaboration with your Couplet here. The words and the imagery carry the reader along on a most enchanted journey. Superb Work!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 8:16 AM - So glad you enjoy this, Gary - Your comment means a lot to me (and Mike) - Many thanks for your "fav" ... happy smile :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 5, 2018 at 7:49 AM Beautiful poem! And a collaboration!? Wonderful work you two. xomo x2 Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 8:13 AM - Many thanks from both of us, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley March 5, 2018 at 7:17 AM Anne- Lise, you and Mike have created a true and brilliant gem with this charming beauty. Love the tying of truth, beauty and love with Heavenly stars and the universe! A fav.... and a true gem... Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 7:24 AM - Both Mike and I greatly appreciate the beautiful words and a "fav", thanks Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman March 5, 2018 at 7:00 AM An awesome imaginative collaboration Ann-Lise!~Che :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 7:15 AM - Thank you Cheryl :) - Appreciate your lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit March 5, 2018 at 6:00 AM Deep like the ocean..lovely thoughts and imagery..kudos to both Anne-Lise and Vladislav! Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 6:17 AM - Many thanks from both of us, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May March 5, 2018 at 5:22 AM Beautiful cowrite...A celestial song of love... Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 5:24 AM - Many thanks from both of us, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham March 5, 2018 at 2:40 AM Well done both, a beautiful collaboration. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 2:51 AM - Always an honor to share ink with a skilled poet, Tom :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton March 5, 2018 at 2:23 AM Divine.x Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 2:49 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Leanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Leanne Lovejoy-Burton March 5, 2018 at 2:27 AM And excellent collaboration.