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Thoughts On Cemetery Ridge

You are the beautiful antique room, half-open, decayed by light and familiar gazes. Lace curtained windows, like eyes that see only the past, you offer wistful, paltry promises of enclosure, but as the wind whispers through the cracks in your walls, you are too cold to offer life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/18/2019 8:09:00 PM
Sounds like this could be a person, as well but then I always had a good imagination. Love your imagery.
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Date: 5/24/2019 2:23:00 PM
Hello Laine Lubar, so nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wow! This poem is differnt. i like the last line the best. have a nice day my friend.
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